If this is poetry...well... then I am unbelievable in the sack...and we all know where...heh, touchè. *7*

Absolutely oustanding for someone more partial to the absence of rhyme, as it seems. *10*

Probably the best limerick on here, save the comma on line two which is just annoying enough.

Is that the literal translation, or did it just happen to rhyme in English as well? *10*

This should really be under prose, which I dislike when associated with poetry, but nevertheless... *6*

If you're going to take that title, at least make an attempt at something worthwile and/or somewhat pleasing to read. *5*

The effort is there, but for something so moving it lacks...lacks...motion. *7*

Maybe the feature song of a sitcom-style broadway play written by a gay Edgar Poe...but other than that, quite normal, if not abnormal. Wait! Oh. *8.1*

Wow! That has got to be... Wow! *4*

Satisfying and all that. *10*

Winnie the Pooh would be very angry with you...
*9*

Not necessarily my cup of specially brewed herbs and spices, but I especially liked S2 L9 and 10 *7*

Congratulations on know knowing that you have have moved an athiest, with words, however disinterested in the message. *9*

As a footnote, the suffix *-ias* means a speech, or figure of speech, designed to move the passion.

Not bad, but can't necessarily see it as a lyric. *8*

Almost had it for a street performer... Statue!? Oh!
*heh* *9.166666666666666666666666666666667*

Wholesome house-building goodness. *9*

not my genre exactly, but well done. *8*

Sounds too much like only the decent beginning of a more substantial poem. I appreciate the use of language. *7*

You continue to amaze and never cease to impress. Fantastic broken lines. Particularly fond of lines 2 and 3. Outstanding! *10.5*

Good, if voted *8*