on At The Sloane Slattery on Saturday by Limness
30 Sep 2002, 2:00 PM
Belching is mis-spelled.
on Life's Unnoticables by apples_tim
27 Sep 2002, 10:42 AM
S2 is anemic, donate some time to it. Sweet, reminds me of A Child's Garden of Verse.
on Wednesday's Breaking by poetandknowit
30 Sep 2002, 1:36 PM
Left me with a sad creepy feeling.
on some deleted poem
30 Sep 2002, 1:51 PM
Boring piece of crap. Good title.
on A Sign on a Giant Donut at a Twenty Four Hour a Day Donut Shop Overlooking Pacific Coast Highway in Sunset Beach California at Eight in the Evening on September Twenty Fourth Two-Thousand and Two by Dark Angle
30 Sep 2002, 1:55 PM
Read Richard Brautigan. He would have given this poem a 10.
on Liberty bells & Disney Land by horus8
30 Sep 2002, 1:15 PM
Very powerful towards the end. I like the way this thing builds. Line 7 seems to have a grammatical error of some kind, or I just don't get it.
on Bobbing for Apples by Rex Karrs
28 Sep 2002, 9:20 AM
Not as good as your 1st one, but still excellent. Fallow is a favorite word. Welcome.
on West Sands, late afternoon in winter by Nicholas Jones
27 Sep 2002, 10:31 AM
This is simple but not simplistic.
on Transfixed (#2) by Christof
27 Sep 2002, 10:37 AM
"How definite you seem" brings the sensation of loving rushing to mind. I place my fingers to my forehead.
on Bloody cow by ==Doylum
27 Sep 2002, 10:58 AM
I have re-read through 6 or 7 of your works and can't find a thing to say.
on Witch to Wicca by Lenore
27 Sep 2002, 11:17 AM
I can feel the witches burning. "And, like a child...children," is my favorite metaphor of yours.
on Black Heart by ThoughtfulSoul
27 Sep 2002, 11:31 AM
All my love to you. My son boxes his friends on the lawn, It works wonders for them. I'm not advocating violence but it seems to me boys need the outlet. So far it's always ended positively. I like your poem.
on RunOnSentence by harrytuttle
26 Sep 2002, 7:41 PM
Gorgeous. If I were you I'd try for something more novel then "Runs like the wind"
on A Day, Wasted by Joyleaf
26 Sep 2002, 8:16 PM
This is great it many ways and awful in others. I don't know what to tell you. It needs work but I don't want you to touch it. I enjoyed this.
on A Day, Wasted by Joyleaf
26 Sep 2002, 8:24 PM
what the fuck am I talking about, this thing is perfect. Some day I want to be the mom that comes downstairs and tells the blue boys to shoo.
on The Writing Life #2 by poetandknowit
26 Sep 2002, 12:36 AM
By the way dear Dr., there's a terrific website, www.todotango.com. I think you'd like it. They have a link to a few Argentine radio stations, the best of them being Radio Criolla. Play it and think of me. Sweet dreams, Caio.
on The Writing Life #2 by poetandknowit
25 Sep 2002, 10:52 PM
I like your poem. Speaking of mail, how would you like to receive a subscription to your favorite magazine? I'm selling them as a fund raiser for my school I need one more subscription by tommorrow to win a really big prize. what do you say? S.O.g
on The plains of Africa by horus8
25 Sep 2002, 10:32 PM
Herr Doktor, you should hear me reading this mother-fucker.
on some deleted poem
26 Sep 2002, 8:07 PM
I believe you do capture. L's 7&8, S3, could be deleted. They detract slightly from not adding.