on Morning Glory by waltfreakinwhitman
25 Sep 2002, 9:33 PM
Great title.
on some deleted poem
25 Sep 2002, 4:01 PM
Fuck me. What an entrance. Come in and take your seat. I am shocked into a silence. Much like prayer following disaster.
on some deleted poem
25 Sep 2002, 8:15 PM
Are you an alchoholic? Drink is omni-present. Good again, great even. I secretly hate you. May we exchange DNA?
on some deleted poem
25 Sep 2002, 8:46 PM
Fetal. A few more weeks in the womb and this one will be able to breath on it's own. Refine your parlance.
on Hey! Shut up, and cut my grass. by horus8
25 Sep 2002, 8:59 PM
Oh my oh my oh my. To find myself hidden among rotting blades. Joey just asked me what m-a-s-o-c-h-i-s-m spells.
on some deleted poem
25 Sep 2002, 9:03 PM
Awkward, but not terrible. Just go over the words, mostly you need to amputate.
on The Left Book Club by Nicholas Jones
25 Sep 2002, 7:16 AM
Please write a short story.
on visitation by Nicholas Jones
25 Sep 2002, 7:21 AM
Thanks for the tour. You make me nosatalgic for a place I've never seen.
on WLPAN by Nicholas Jones
25 Sep 2002, 7:27 AM
I'm falling in love with you. You are one of the few best of luck to you.
on The Nights Draw In by Nicholas Jones
25 Sep 2002, 7:32 AM
I wish I could right as directly as you. You don't seem at all pretentious.
on Noblesse Oblige by Christof
25 Sep 2002, 7:37 AM
You're sick with talent. How do I learn to write about things outside myself? I love feeling incompetent. It motivates me.
on some deleted poem
25 Sep 2002, 7:54 AM
Dream away. Have your visions, it is your right. Why doesn't God set things on fire anymore. The burning Brita pitcher is telling me to bring you the good news.
on Since The Fall by harrytuttle
24 Sep 2002, 8:28 AM
L12 & 13 could be a poem on there own, Good. the last 2 lines are over used. I think the poem would do better without them.
on Horseflies and Mayflies, Incessant Today by Christof
24 Sep 2002, 9:16 AM
This poem makes me happy. I built a whole world around it. This and Butcher are my favorites. I hope your girl appreciates your poetry. I off to enlightened the masses. Today we're talking about violencia domestica. Have a lovely evening.
on Triangle of the Courtyard Square by OneFingerAnswer
23 Sep 2002, 11:07 PM
All those he shes he she she he hehhehehehshehshehheheheehshhshshsehessh
on some deleted poem
23 Sep 2002, 11:12 PM
This is dead honest and so I love it. Assertive and sad, ain't it like a poet.
on happy hour by Limness
23 Sep 2002, 11:16 PM
Fuckin' a. As the dudes would say. You got this case won. Open and shut.
on Morning conflict by INTRANSIT
24 Sep 2002, 8:19 AM
This is adorable. I don't understand the lack of triumph at the end.
on Triangle of the Courtyard Square by OneFingerAnswer
23 Sep 2002, 11:37 PM
It doesn't work. S4 L5 is muddled.