replying on Creativity. by Blue Magpie
9 Oct 2002, 8:56 PM
I think that's exactly what they do. Much like your website. I'm assuming you're passion is lending a hand so people can appreciate this brief existence a little bit more. Looking forward to seeing your more serious poetry.
replying on Trembling Worry by Ninoy_Instigator
9 Oct 2002, 8:40 PM
think about it for a minute. What are the gender roles in your culture? My culture is Hispanic which is very similar to yours. Of course I'm generalizing but let's just say that more often then not women are constrained by our cultures to certain gender specific roles. the standards and expectations set up for men and women are very different. Everything from virginity to hierarchy. Your poem mirrors that. I sure your intentions are good, but you have to open yourself up to being the kind of partner who will help a person find themselves not play house
on why? by little_angel_maria
9 Oct 2002, 8:32 PM
I just want to let you know I'm very proud of you for being able to share what happened to you. You should contact www.rainn.org. they'd love to hear from you. Get all the support you need. I know exactly what you're going through.
replying on Trembling Worry by Ninoy_Instigator
9 Oct 2002, 8:27 PM
I asumed you were Filipino. Clits and fucking are best when mature.
on Ode to my childhood by nopal
9 Oct 2002, 8:20 PM
I rather like the first stanza, then it loses it's momentum.
on Confused by planetdicko
9 Oct 2002, 7:55 PM
the rhyme scheme of the last stanza has some merit. I suggest you take a writing class. Also find what you love and read it til it falls apart.
on The right one by dngrules
9 Oct 2002, 2:31 PM
Start by living in the space between past and future. Sorry to disappoint but there are countless people out there who could make you happy. It's just a matter of wanting to sustain the illusion. You're poem is bogged down with repetitive language and a lack of creativity.
replying on Trembling Worry by Ninoy_Instigator
9 Oct 2002, 2:09 PM
If you are referring to me as 'girl' you couldn't be more wrong. I am a woman to the full extent of what the word implies, and dare I say more man then you at this moment in time. I couldn't possibly hate a juvenile machista like you. Your revelatory remark about not expressing yourself to girls, marks you as the ego-maniacal, oppressive, controlling husband/father your culture breeds. I am latina and well versed in the pitfalls of parternalistic societies. Joanna would do better to fuck everyone of those assholes, just to learn what really gives her pleasure, Which I'm sure you are throughly incapable of doing. Ever licked a clit? She should go to university and make her own life. Thus avoiding enslavement and boredom by marriage to your kind.
on ITS A SHAMBLES by lukehanney
9 Oct 2002, 10:36 AM
Personally, I've never liked inversions. I'd much rather sacrifice the rhyme. I'm a big sports fan. Baseball, followed closely by what is known here as soccer. It a bitch not to score. the inversion kills this for me. I want you to tell me more about the play.
on Creativity. by Blue Magpie
9 Oct 2002, 9:49 AM
Your poems are not grand but they are effective. "My self a little happiness..." is very dear to my heart. A sweet and humble philosophy. By the way, youe website is beautiful my son and I browsed through a little last night, he will definitely be benefiting from it. It's very pretty. I will make a point to use the search engine there.
on Return to Kadath by razorgrin
9 Oct 2002, 8:23 AM
Hey razorgrin! Posting soon? Hadn't read this, actually come to think of it I may have overlooked your poems. Love the word pickman. The 2nd couplet is my favorite, even though "moon-trees brew" seemed awkward, or maybe because.
on Ambiguous Love Poem For A Girl I Once Knew by poetandknowit
9 Oct 2002, 12:42 AM
Ambiguous Love Poem for a Girl I Never Knew.
on Ambiguous Love Poem For A Girl I Once Knew by poetandknowit
9 Oct 2002, 12:40 AM
Write me one of these.
on Drunken note #1 by blackball
8 Oct 2002, 11:58 PM
Well these are pretty bad. Maybe drunk is not your color. There not as bad as the moronic comments left by Jigg. You're not really saying anything are you?
on rapping on caffeine by blackball
8 Oct 2002, 11:37 PM
Ilike this. Except for "live and die..." how does one live and die by fraility. I'm not getting it. The last couplet is strong, sensual and sad. For your mere 19, not bad at all. 19, good god.
replying on Trembling Worry by Ninoy_Instigator
8 Oct 2002, 8:00 PM
Baby, you look sexy to me too. Talk with you soon.
replying on Trembling Worry by Ninoy_Instigator
8 Oct 2002, 7:50 PM
I immediately take no stereotypes. You are jumpimg to conclusions. The poem you're referring to does not state that all muslims are evil. first of all I don't even believe in evil. Second of all I am the least prejudice person you will ever have the luck to run in to. I love the poem because of it's structure and it's satire on this whole terrorist nonsense. You take yourself too seriously. Stop making a jackass of yourself. The world is full of viewpoints. Learn how to handle yourself like an adult. What kind of stereotype am I? you know nothing about me, my life-style, or my beliefs. I am everything you third-worlders wish all Americans would be. you owe me an apology.
on Sanity's Defeat by loneshadow29
8 Oct 2002, 7:07 PM
Sweet child. You are alone because you choose it, or because you need chemicals to help you with your depression. Either way, it makes me sad to think of you languishing in solitude. Life is short to the extreme.