Comments byzodiac, 621–640 back. Include replies

on The Narrow Way by Jeremi B. Handrinos 25 Mar 2005, 10:17 PM
LOL
on No Worries by Dovina 20 Mar 2005, 2:31 AM
Surely, indeed.
on some deleted poem 20 Mar 2005, 2:36 AM
Wait a minute. Surely the person you're addressing has some other praiseworthy feature besides beauty (ie, making him/her more worthy of praise than the reflection). Then it all goes downhill from there.
on some deleted poem 20 Mar 2005, 2:42 AM
Hey, welcome to poemranker! You don't need to post explanations for your poems. Seriously.
1) Are you on The O.C.?

2) Are you reading The Da Vinci Code?
on WHY DAD?WHY? by RION12 20 Mar 2005, 2:47 AM
You should travel back in time 15 years and start a grunge band.
on some deleted poem 20 Mar 2005, 2:49 AM
Great, YOUR ancestors probably lived in Spain more recently than hers did.
on stab in the dark by not_a_philosopher 21 Mar 2005, 10:48 PM
Probably because you spend too much time hanging out with those Baptist Student Union band-chicks.
on Reasonably Good by Dovina 21 Mar 2005, 10:53 PM
Do you love Uranium 238? Why?
on That Moment by RION12 21 Mar 2005, 10:58 PM
How dreadfully convenient your life must be.

Which of the following do you think was your biggest mistake:

a) knowing at that first moment that you were meant to be,
b) doing "something very wrong", or
c) knowing at the last moment you weren't meant to be?
on some deleted poem 21 Mar 2005, 11:04 PM
Um, shouldn't you be grown up by now? What are you, like 30?
on Crazy by the_poetess 21 Mar 2005, 11:12 PM
You should be here. Talk about meanings having words or whatever, yesterday I watched a normal Arabic adult stare at a playground slide outside her classroom for 15 minutes while she tried to think of an Arabic word meaning "slide". Later, I saw another woman do the same thing thinking of the Arabic word for "calendar". Weird, huh?
on some deleted poem 25 Mar 2005, 10:22 PM
enrapt isn't a verb.
on calling by celticskatermatt1 25 Mar 2005, 10:05 PM
"nailed" should be "nailt"
"spilt" should be "split"
So I bearded him once (feeling larkey)
With a rich Putinesque Oligarchy.
But the crowd wasn't wooed;
I was fined for two lewds
And one Conduct Unbecoming a Darkey.
on Sisters of mercy by titan69 25 Mar 2005, 10:10 PM
The best part is "pail moonlight".
on Amsterdam One by durr_T_hip_E 25 Mar 2005, 10:16 PM
Really? I was under the impression only Americans carry backpacks anymore.
on The White Room by thepinkbunnyofdoom 25 Mar 2005, 10:23 PM
Q1: Would you ever consider writing a poem about an actual experience of yours?

Q2: Would you ever consider having an actual experience?
on Cancer by mindsigns 25 Mar 2005, 10:24 PM
Hey, did you ever notice that no one likes cancer?
on The Lying Game by PsydewaysTears 25 Mar 2005, 10:25 PM
You were probably like negative two years old when the song "The Crying Game" was popular.