Re: a comment on The Unseen by cuddlytiger17	15-May-04/2:39 PM
Okay, look, I'm sorry for making fun of you in the past, and I've really not been trying to do that here. I do have some idea what it's like living in an abusive parental (or foster parental) situation, but cutting is a supremely awful way of dealing with it. And even if there is a real psychological disorder that compels people to mutilate their bodies, I can assure you that you don't have it. In fact, I don't think you really are a cutter (none of the people who've claimed to be on this site in the past have really been,) but whether you are or not it's a serious, crazy thing to be bandying around in this fashion. Buck up, kid. You'll be 18 and away from that house in no time - even though at this point I'm absolutely sure it feels like forever. -zodiac
Re: a comment on In the Land of Bob by Bobjim	15-May-04/12:07 PM
Take a gander at http://tinyurl.com/2bwgx
Re: a comment on The Unseen by cuddlytiger17	15-May-04/12:04 PM
Perhaps what attracts you to cutting is that it is so sexy and it lets out the beauty thats hidden inside you. Let me ask you, do you look like this? http://tinyurl.com/254qo Or this? http://tinyurl.com/3fxya Or this? http://tinyurl.com/39hgg
Re: The Unseen by cuddlytiger17	15-May-04/8:40 AM
You're a very naughty girl, cuddlytiger.
Re: Fear by Phalkon	14-May-04/6:16 AM
What do you mean by "my fears begin to forte"? The most logical explanation I can come up with is that you're using some kind of obsolete olden verb meaning "to builde a [sofa cushion] fortresse." Is this the case?
Re: a comment on She Dreams of Yesterday by Phalkon	14-May-04/6:07 AM
Might I recommend one of these? http://tinyurl.com/2f39x
Re: The Ballad of Fraser Allonby Q.C., Barrister-At-Law by wFraser Allonby Q.C.w	14-May-04/5:19 AM
Ace!
Re: untitled: dedicated to my soldier/husband by SweetJuliet10	14-May-04/4:39 AM
I read "my soldier/husband" as "my soldier and/or my husband". Am I to understand that you have your own soldier in addition to having a husband? How does that work, exactly? Is he an "Army of One"? I suppose you might have meant "my soldier divided by my husband," but if you divide a soldier by a husband, what is the result? A bit of body armor, testosterone, and barely-concealed homoerotic tendencies over 1, I imagine.
Re: death makes me vain! by SweetJuliet10	14-May-04/4:28 AM
Hey, wow! I can tell your contribution to poemranker is going to be valuable and interesting! Except for the fact that you're going to leave in a week without even bothering to change your username to 'Deleted User' when you find your poems can't receive any 'constructive criticism' here.
Re: a comment on Domingos by candaliesa	14-May-04/3:34 AM
How about ABbACDBACDBbABCDDCB?
Re: a comment on She Dreams of Yesterday by Phalkon	14-May-04/3:31 AM
As usual, I have no idea what you're saying, Blindpoetry.
Re: a comment on The Nude by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	14-May-04/3:30 AM
Wow! Criticizing poems on the Worst list! What a great idea!
Re: a comment on The Blood-Stained Body by Phalkon	13-May-04/5:17 PM
Oh God! I've made a terrible blunder! I have to go now...
Re: a comment on She Dreams of Yesterday by Phalkon	13-May-04/5:15 PM
Hmm. No, my imagination still tells me you're a dork.
Re: a comment on The Blood-Stained Body by Phalkon	13-May-04/4:40 PM
And congratulations on writing a probability formula that isn't utter, utter bow'ls.
Re: a comment on The Blood-Stained Body by Phalkon	13-May-04/4:36 PM
Bow'ls. I suppose you're the sexual norm.
Re: a comment on The Blood-Stained Body by Phalkon	13-May-04/4:29 PM
I'm quoting a famous conservative American pundit. Who are you quoting?
Re: a comment on inverse square by ex0teric	13-May-04/4:22 PM
Or perhaps that, in the spirit of Carawax's Dictum, the truth of a proposition may be measured by the peculiar resonance it causes in the hearer's buttocks.
Re: She Dreams of Yesterday by Phalkon	13-May-04/11:07 AM
"the days go on without her...and she dreams of yesterday" makes no sense. "she's never had true love she's never had a life she's never had a family she never had money but she never had greed and she dreams of yesterday" makes no sense. "every day is dark and gloomy...and she dreams of yesterday" makes no sense. "she believes in God and an afterlife but she dreams of yesterday" makes no sense.
Re: a comment on The Blood-Stained Body by Phalkon	13-May-04/9:11 AM
Well... you're gay, right?