Re: a comment on questions by ggawrysi	20-Apr-04/12:27 PM
"Polished."
Re: a comment on questions by ggawrysi	20-Apr-04/11:24 AM
Battered candlestick doesn't make any sense.
Re: #20 by mikejedw	20-Apr-04/6:32 AM
I would beware that 1) your first line [perhaps unconsciously] sounds like Carl Sandburg's superfamoso "Fog", and 2) it doesn't make any sense to crawl on one's feet.
Re: a comment on Dear M Foucault, or, How I knew our relationship was doomed by zodiac	20-Apr-04/6:28 AM
No.
Re: questions by ggawrysi	20-Apr-04/4:19 AM
We know how: Professor Plum with the candlestick.
Re: a comment on Ballad for a bad Irish accent by zodiac	20-Apr-04/4:16 AM
Did you have some help typing this comment?
Re: a comment on Jesus Creased by <{Baba^Yaga}>	20-Apr-04/4:14 AM
way to much drama here, sounds like you are trying really hard to be cool, bad and tough. But why don't you pull your fists out of your mouth before speaking?
Re: a comment on Dear M Foucault, or, How I knew our relationship was doomed by zodiac	20-Apr-04/4:11 AM
ABCDEFG / BCDEFGA / CDEFGBA / DGACBEF / EFGBCAD / FGABCDE / GABCDEF.
Re: a comment on Take Four by NanceXToo	19-Apr-04/5:54 PM
Are you coming back, z? Your coyote villanelle is one of the best posts on the site.
Re: innocent voyeur by nentwined	19-Apr-04/5:52 PM
The (current) last line seems fine to me.
Re: From Treehouse To Factory by Shardik	19-Apr-04/2:24 PM
The last line would be better "We all went home having learned nothing." Maybe that's what you meant. This is one of your best, anyway.
Re: pondering by xunitedx	19-Apr-04/2:05 PM
everything just makes it worse / you’ll never hear me yell "it’s like my life is one big curse"
Re: a comment on untitled by waxtester	19-Apr-04/2:04 PM
I meant "trolls", "The gothic clocks struck their trolls."
Re: untitled by waxtester	19-Apr-04/2:00 PM
Please post the poem that begins "The gothic clocks struck their tolls" next.
Re: a comment on LOVE-ABOVE LISTE by Everyone	19-Apr-04/12:46 PM
Sexy, too. But I'm married, sorry.
Re: a comment on LOVE-ABOVE LISTE by Everyone	19-Apr-04/12:42 PM
If someone deletes a comment while you're trying to post a response to it, your response ends up floating on the comments page like a county-fair's deformed foetus in a jar, while remaining invisible on the poem-page you posted it to.
Re: a comment on LOVE-ABOVE LISTE by Everyone	19-Apr-04/12:36 PM
Okay, certainly everybody has realized that 94 isn't 'over 25%' of 389. I know, but it's in the red ether of Numenoria now and I can't change it. You know what I meant.
Re: a comment on LOVE-ABOVE LISTE by Everyone	19-Apr-04/12:28 PM
There are 389 occurrences of 'above' in poemranker poems. 94 of those are rhymed with 'love'. That is, over 25%.
Re: From Treehouse To Factory by Shardik	19-Apr-04/12:16 PM
Hey, remember all those nights when I was laying your kid sister and you were down in the bottom bunk and you didn't say anything about it or go tell your folks - were you jerking off to us then? God! That's terrible! I mean, it was your ten-year-old sister, for Christ's sake! Shame! Shame!
Re: a comment on LOVE-ABOVE LISTE by Everyone	19-Apr-04/12:13 PM
You've gotta PRODUCE, sister! Take simone_girard -- She scored an incredible 5 love-aboves in only 4 posts. You just haven't shown that sort of determination, I'm sorry to say. No, it's back to the minor leagues for you.