| Re: a comment on Good King Brownceslas by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
25-Feb-04/2:55 PM |
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| Re: a comment on Good King Brownceslas by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
25-Feb-04/12:08 PM |
"Sire," quoth page with wrinkl'd brow
And cheek all alabaster,
"My flow is dam'd, I know not how,
But fear it spells disaster!"
"Calm ye," said the goodly lord,
"Tho ye be strain'd and swollen,"
And fisted him until cack pour'd
From his distended co-o-lon.
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| Re: Wartner by unouluvme |
25-Feb-04/11:32 AM |
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| Re: a comment on Amateur excavators by darkshark |
25-Feb-04/10:56 AM |
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That's ridiculous. A strumpet apostrophe.
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| Re: Good King Brownceslas by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
25-Feb-04/10:53 AM |
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The best rhyming on this site ever! Horizon/wisened, hardened/pardened (sic), tincture/sphincter, sure/ordure - gems all. And a worthy lesson to CLS and her ilk, if they weren't too stupid to recognise it.
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| Re: a comment on Whore Of Nazareth by Mona Lisa |
24-Feb-04/6:18 PM |
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And I find that the word is mostly written _bow'ls_ on this site. _Bow'l's_ may suppose a second dropped 'e': _BOWELES_. It's not impossible, but not really desirable, either.
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| Re: Whore Of Nazareth by Mona Lisa |
24-Feb-04/6:17 PM |
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rockmage's last login: Tuesday, 17-Feb-04/7:08 PM.
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| Re: a comment on Whore Of Nazareth by Mona Lisa |
24-Feb-04/4:53 PM |
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| Re: a comment on Whore Of Nazareth by Mona Lisa |
24-Feb-04/2:55 PM |
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Whatever the condition of -=Dark_Angel=-'s bow'ls, mine are not possessive. Far from it.
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| Re: Whore Of Nazareth by Mona Lisa |
24-Feb-04/1:46 PM |
"And my wombs not yellowed by life," - as good a place as any for:
Bow'ls.
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| Re: Inevitable by _iamtwilight_ |
23-Feb-04/9:03 AM |
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| Re: a comment on Upon the Battlefield by cleverdevice |
23-Feb-04/8:37 AM |
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Still plagiarism. a) you take credit by not using quotes or otherwise explicitly giving credit to its author within the text of the poem. b) if I reposted this entire poem with only the single line added at the end "in a sweatshirt with a drawstring hood", I could not reasonably call it my own. Cock. I blame you.
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| Re: The Commanding Disobedince of Words by daggatolar |
23-Feb-04/8:29 AM |
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You have no command over your disobedient words. The old couples in the adjoining apartments hear them screeching all day for sugar-teats while you chain-smoke Virginia Slims 100s on your chintz-pattern couch, watch your "stories" and ignore them entirely. People like you, they mutter in the halls, have no right to words... Somebody oughta call the law on you...
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| Re: Mirrored Dream by Blindpoetry |
23-Feb-04/8:19 AM |
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Mirror shmirror. To, of course, should be too.
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| Re: The Winturd Tale of Sir Donald Nudesby by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
23-Feb-04/8:17 AM |
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The best of the outhouse tales, I think (and a woman character, finally!) But when can we expect more AIDS?
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| Re: a comment on Upon the Battlefield by cleverdevice |
23-Feb-04/7:40 AM |
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Um, plagiarism. And a strife/life rhyme to boot.
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| Re: a comment on AIDS in a Glass by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
21-Feb-04/2:46 PM |
Sunshine Conkey - are you forsaken's and forsaken'sbigbro's mom? Do you know what they do here?
(From Jews (Free verse) by forsaken'sbigbro)
"...Would you die for your people or just let your people die?
If we were all like Jews we would, we would just sit there waiting in
line for a Nazi to push us to our death in their happy time showers."
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| Re: a comment on AIDS in a Glass by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
21-Feb-04/2:28 PM |
"mother of 7 kids, few of them write poems also. I've lived in AZ for 5 yrs, moved from NH, with all 7 kids crammed in 1 car."
potentially associated with the user "Sunshine Conkey" by login, vote, and comment:
forsaken (ips by user)
forsaken'sbigbro (ips by user)
Sunshine Conkey (ips by user)
weareonlymortal (ips by user)
[Hmmm...]
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| Re: a comment on Holding on for Jesus by Everyone |
19-Feb-04/3:47 PM |
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I'm afraid no one else is going to point out to you that believing in the significance of the number 666 means you implicitly believe in Jesus - so here you go. Why I'm taking the trouble to tell you this is beyond me, except that I vaguely feel sorry for you. You're like an escaped Flannery O'Connor character, a poor pre-gorilla-suit Enoch Emery. I love her stuff.
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| Re: a comment on Holding on for Jesus by Everyone |
19-Feb-04/3:34 PM |
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