replying on Grieving by d35
24 Jan 2004, 3:40 PM
really? I thought they meant gown. You know, after they cut this loose [off the corpse], they bury it [wrapped up] in the [corpse's] cold gown. Makes more sense, don't you think? I think it's pretty clear the pome is about the fevered thoughts of a serial killer.
on The Grandfather Suite by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
24 Jan 2004, 7:08 AM
My Grandfather loved me the best,
He said, holding me close to his chest
I stayed deathly still
'till his snores sounded shrill
and I could unstick my face from his vest.
He said, holding me close to his chest
I stayed deathly still
'till his snores sounded shrill
and I could unstick my face from his vest.
on Your Kind by TripleHGurl
23 Jan 2004, 4:51 PM
What the hell are you talking about? What kind? Can we get some kind of clue here what you're talking about?
on That's What It's all about. by madjack2
23 Jan 2004, 4:49 PM
what what's all about? The hokey pokey? Please next time wait 'till it has stopped dribbling before you shake it all about.
on She Cries by holden_caulfield
23 Jan 2004, 4:38 PM
Who the fuck is she? WHY did the stars become runny? Let me get this straight: a naked ship is going to fall on us gently like a snowflake out of the winter mists? A ship... Okey dokey. How can the gentle, floating ship be both brittle and snowflake-like?
on Poem #5 (of a series of poems for Boo) by Owner of the Sky
23 Jan 2004, 4:26 PM
I don't want to be touched by Boo.
on simple silence by daniella
23 Jan 2004, 4:22 PM
well, you certainly squeezed that one dry. You must have been thirsty. That can happen when you go wandering in the arroyos of life. Dry, dry, dry, and then BAM a deluge that leaves you broken and sodden.
replying on Love Obsession (the stalker's song) by evergreen
23 Jan 2004, 4:09 PM
Oh? and it didn't remind you of, um, any mid-eighties dance music, at all?
replying on Love Obsession (the stalker's song) by evergreen
23 Jan 2004, 4:05 PM
um, there already is a song. It's fluttering around in my mind right now, like a wild butterfly.
replying on Drunk Satan by smlink84
21 Jan 2004, 12:58 AM
lololol, oh penguin fiend my dear, post just one of your "poems" on eratosphere. Go on, I dare you.
replying on Last Night by middenHeap
20 Jan 2004, 2:36 PM
aww, this is one of my favouritest pomes from the old days. It's so sad & subtle. They will break up, but they don't quite know it out loud yet.
replying on Tide Pool by middenHeap
20 Jan 2004, 9:58 AM
a little late...
Well I see that this "thing"'s got you livid
And you're sure I should be much more vivid
But too long with thesaurus
Tends to frustrate and bore us
If you know which word's best than just give it.
Well I see that this "thing"'s got you livid
And you're sure I should be much more vivid
But too long with thesaurus
Tends to frustrate and bore us
If you know which word's best than just give it.
replying on Tide Pool by middenHeap
20 Jan 2004, 8:18 AM
Since you tire so quickly this session
I'll allow you to maintain your repression
But no-one is fooled
Because how well you tooled
Your replies constitutes a confession
I'll allow you to maintain your repression
But no-one is fooled
Because how well you tooled
Your replies constitutes a confession
replying on Tide Pool by middenHeap
20 Jan 2004, 8:17 AM
This modus of discourse is dear to me
And it's swell to find one who's a peer to me
To wrap up this round
I'll concede your crit sound
Though I doubt your advice will adhere to me
And it's swell to find one who's a peer to me
To wrap up this round
I'll concede your crit sound
Though I doubt your advice will adhere to me
replying on Tide Pool by middenHeap
20 Jan 2004, 1:58 AM
Your attack on my "thing" is so vicious
That it leaves me quite frankly suspicious
that you think something's wrong
with both my song & my dong
But I assure you my "thing" is delicious
That it leaves me quite frankly suspicious
that you think something's wrong
with both my song & my dong
But I assure you my "thing" is delicious
replying on Tide Pool by middenHeap
20 Jan 2004, 1:42 AM
Since my "thing" seems to arouse your attention
I'm left with a dark apprehension
I will keep to bright paths
(and stay away from the baths)
So we don't risk any further accension.
I'm left with a dark apprehension
I will keep to bright paths
(and stay away from the baths)
So we don't risk any further accension.
replying on Why you don't fall through the floor by ?-Dave_Mysterious-?
19 Jan 2004, 4:25 PM
Now that right there is why I keep coming back to pomeranker. It sure as hell ain't the orchard. I mean, the poetry.
replying on Tide Pool by middenHeap
19 Jan 2004, 4:13 PM
Not to bore the bystanders, shall we continue this discussion in limerick form? So:
"you shouldn't have used the word thing"
comes a voice from th' ecliptical ring
but varmint & critter
don't hardly seem fitter
lest I too far to the plebian swing.
"you shouldn't have used the word thing"
comes a voice from th' ecliptical ring
but varmint & critter
don't hardly seem fitter
lest I too far to the plebian swing.