on Are You O.K.? by sonawrote
28 Jan 2004, 8:27 PM
then in that case I was ahead of myself....it was written when I was 14 in Chem class.....board meetings were 10 years away.....
on missin' you by clumseYdaiseY
30 Jan 2004, 8:53 PM
we've all been there once
on You Know Not by broken_wing11
30 Jan 2004, 9:06 PM
I like it but feel after 2 readings that there is a small suggestion....add the word time after night in 8th line...flow would be smoother
on My heart had a war...no body won by sonawrote
7 Feb 2004, 10:06 PM
don't care if no one likes this....just had to get this day off my chest....
on some deleted poem
7 Feb 2004, 10:18 PM
was there today...almost...thanks Crystal
on Almost One by thepinkbunnyofdoom
2 Apr 2004, 7:29 PM
nice....
on f*ckyouoldmenandyourrules by Damien_
18 Apr 2005, 8:57 PM
Finally, someone on this site with a brain & talent,the only nasty comments U will get is from those you speak of.....deeply enjoyed this one, you should be doing stand up though.....Def poetry Jam would love you....Ella
on Bad grammar and spelling mistakes by Damien
18 Apr 2005, 9:02 PM
keep it up....I'll always read what u got cummin'
on 15 Minute poem by Damien
18 Apr 2005, 9:05 PM
Hey Damien, nice piece, have u ever considered stand up in NY? I could set u up w/ some people that would love ya....set u in motion to where u should be already on TV...get in touch ellasona@yahoo.com
on Gaping Hole by sonawrote
20 Apr 2005, 7:17 PM
I edited the title since some of the MORONS that read here are trying to be comedians.....and doing a pathetic job at it
on A new leaf by Damien
20 Apr 2005, 7:20 PM
keep going Damien.....chin up chin up,no one ever got to their destination looking at their feet!
on crying tears by NeeMan
24 Sep 2007, 11:30 AM
I love it, but here(PR) my opinion never counts for much but to be bashed!I don't care, I love it anyway
on 'Till Then by sliver
24 Sep 2007, 8:50 PM
beautifully expressed, thank you for sharing this part of your life with all of us out here
on some deleted poem
19 Oct 2007, 6:23 AM
I love the imadry created in this one....very touching
on My Courtney by secretlyvulnerable
19 Oct 2007, 6:26 AM
a sigh and a tear...very heartfelt. Keep writing love
on May Sinners Rot In Fucking Hell! by Sing4Jesus!
19 Oct 2007, 6:30 AM
not comment worthy....
on The Friendship Storm by x0lovelylarnx0
19 Oct 2007, 11:28 AM
despite the ongoing comments by other people, I liked this it even made me go read more of your stuff....