on some deleted poem
16 Aug 2002, 10:37 AM
And thank you for that. Definitely will yank it and revamp.
on Exquisite Explosion by Venus
16 Aug 2002, 3:24 PM
A coming thunderstorm will work if you like, but think of it on a more erotic level...
on tears beyond hope by Mystifying
17 Aug 2002, 1:07 PM
i all sew sport publik edekashun, butt alls she need is luv! I'm really just mystified that mystifying is spelled correctly. It's a mystery, a riddle, wrapped in an enigma. I think 'tears beyond hope' deserves a 'poetry beyond hope' award. Oh, this is getting ugly, I must quickly drain a beer now.
on Pi'd Piper by [mojo]
18 Aug 2002, 4:51 PM
I must admit his tune has charmed me more times than I can remember. Really excellent. 10/10
on tears beyond hope by Mystifying
17 Aug 2002, 12:31 PM
Just perusing the Worst section for some giggles (thanks WFW & DA), and came across this literary masterpiece. I don't make a habit of commenting on pieces like this one, but I must say that this truly made me weep. 1/10 for the consistent usage of one of my all-time favorite words, 'alls'.
on The Messenger (The Unreplaceable And Greatly Missed Mr. Mercury) by anagram
17 Aug 2002, 9:49 AM
To P&K, one eventually becomes accustomed to the lack of oxygen up here. You will soon begin operating on a new and exciting level of consciousness. 6/10 for the lovely tribute. mama mia.
on The Messenger (The Unreplaceable And Greatly Missed Mr. Mercury) by anagram
17 Aug 2002, 10:32 AM
P&K, I wouldn't concern myself too much about the poor fella; the occasional basal cell has become a badge of honor for those happy golfer republican types. And I'd ask you to kindly keep my big hills out of this.
on Thorns by poetandknowit
16 Aug 2002, 12:10 PM
Was it really supposed to be a secret? The dual identity of Horus8? One only has to check out the MP3 to see that Bachus is an alter ego. You gypsy rogue you!
on Bloody cow by ==Doylum
16 Aug 2002, 10:14 AM
I met her on a monday and my balls turned blue, da do run run run da do run run, saw her on a tuesday fucking someone new, da do run run run da do run run, yeah! My balls turned blue! yeah! She fucked someone new! I chopped her into pieces (cuz I really don't like girls much anyway, they're all so mean - why won't they love me?) ...da do run run run da do run run
on some deleted poem
16 Aug 2002, 11:02 AM
And you smell like poopie sometimes
on Thornapple the Babyfat by <{Baba^Yaga}>
18 Aug 2002, 10:32 AM
8/10 I'd like to hear it with the music.
on Arachnid by quantumenterprises
18 Aug 2002, 11:45 AM
Snappy rhythm and jolly good fun + I love spiders too. 9/10