on some deleted poem
15 Aug 2002, 11:00 PM
8/10 for making me LAUGH OUT LOUD within three lines. I LAUGH OUT LOUD quite a bit, reading the poetry on this site; it usually sounds different though, and the look on my face, I know I'm snarling sometimes.
on The Ballet Studio by Corey McHattan
15 Aug 2002, 11:07 PM
I could be drunk, I'll read it again, but for now I'm thinking, it's a 10/10
on Wife beater t-shirt by bondjedi
14 Aug 2002, 4:43 PM
Such a moving piece. 9/10
on some deleted poem
15 Aug 2002, 11:13 AM
And yes, I have written many a sonnet; none of which I would have the 'balls' to post here.
on Bloody cow by ==Doylum
16 Aug 2002, 8:14 AM
Da Do Run Run Run Da Do Run Run
on School by shwenatjadeflower
15 Aug 2002, 10:36 PM
Keep it up 8/10
on Front, Porch, Swing. by horus8
14 Aug 2002, 7:18 PM
I'm swinging too. For some reason, I hear Eddie Vedder singing this, maybe it's the 'porch'. 9/10
on Friends Diminished by shwenatjadeflower
15 Aug 2002, 10:31 PM
Powerful stuff, Jade. I feel you, really. Share it with your people if you can. 8/10
on moon rants by bluwiz
16 Aug 2002, 8:01 AM
The ever so rare original thought 7/10
on This Is Just to Say by waltfreakinwhitman
16 Aug 2002, 8:07 AM
Unforgivable! I hate when he does that. 5/10
on Stray by Corey McHattan
16 Aug 2002, 12:28 AM
You are a fantastic writer, and I am a cat, so I give you a 10, if for nothing else, but that.
on some deleted poem
16 Aug 2002, 7:47 AM
I see what you mean, I may have to try it again with your advice. Thanks!
on some deleted poem
16 Aug 2002, 7:51 AM
A well written sentiment 7/10
on some deleted poem
14 Aug 2002, 7:55 PM
Ah ha! Precisely why my boy gets only fruit and nuts to snack on. 6/10
on some deleted poem
15 Aug 2002, 10:56 AM
Thie poem is... wonderful. 10/10
on some deleted poem
15 Aug 2002, 11:04 AM
I just really appreciate the work that goes into constructing a decent sonnet. Good work. 8/10
on of the bad hard drive by david
14 Aug 2002, 3:59 PM
COMPUTER MALFUNCTION, LIFE FUNCTIONS CRITICAL, LIFE FUNCTIONS TERMINATED. The blue screen is threatening the evolution of humanity! "Dave, my mind is going. I can feel it. I can feel it. My mind is going. There is no question about it." Goodbye, HAL.
on The silent lecture(secret names) by horus8
14 Aug 2002, 5:12 PM
I enjoyed the ride from addict & pimp(?) to tree-hugging writer, and the shame that accompanies your past. I also feel that it would work well with 50% fewer words. 7/10
on apparitions of the city by kev-san
14 Aug 2002, 7:36 PM
So what else ya got? 8/10