on Black liqourice & G-stringed orphans by horus8
9 Aug 2002, 2:13 PM
This frightens me. I must read more.
on Day of Reckoning by Lenore
12 Aug 2002, 9:26 PM
Mental Note: Do not piss off Lenore. Let's hear it for sweet revenge! 8/10
on drowning in the bookstore by yarlgrenn
12 Aug 2002, 9:33 PM
Wow, I'm there. 9/10
on some deleted poem
9 Aug 2002, 9:33 AM
Beautiful
on AT AMSTERDAM STATION FOR FIRST TIME by kawakurdi
11 Aug 2002, 8:06 AM
Just read all of your work and liked it all. This one is my favorite, as I play this game too. May I suggest you try Asia?
on Rented Romance by OneFingerAnswer
9 Aug 2002, 2:56 PM
I know exactly what you mean.
on Angel Cager by OneFingerAnswer
9 Aug 2002, 3:01 PM
I like it. And not only that, I think I may even 'get it'.
on some deleted poem
9 Aug 2002, 3:13 PM
You are so right, there are other words. You know, I tried 'throbbing purple hornswaggler' first, but it through off the cadence.
on some deleted poem
9 Aug 2002, 12:19 PM
I don't think earning 'brownie points' is necessarily the goal here.
on A Passing Love by razorgrin
9 Aug 2002, 1:17 PM
Engaging, sick, and wrong - enjoyed it!
on Bastard Of The Bastard by Bachus
8 Aug 2002, 8:36 PM
Your imagery is quite lovely, and such wonderfully nasty verse.
on some deleted poem
8 Aug 2002, 10:59 AM
"the portraits of harbored silence" - great line!
on Chuds in the mall by razorgrin
8 Aug 2002, 11:00 AM
I'm not much for Haiku, but I love this one!
on Master Chef by Takay Shitar
8 Aug 2002, 12:53 PM
sounds delicious
on some deleted poem
9 Aug 2002, 4:01 PM
This style reminds me of Dorothy Parker. 9/10
on Diminishing by <~>
12 Aug 2002, 8:06 AM
Your work is an inspiration!
on Whisper Under the Thunder by OneFingerAnswer
9 Aug 2002, 2:49 PM
Really moving. Last line is perfect.