replying on The Coming Light by poetandknowit
22 Jan 2003, 10:42 AM
Tell dear limonade that I wish her a fond farewell and all the best, and that I will think nothing but the warmest thoughts of our brief time spent together although I shall do it with a broken heart.
on quarantine agenda by crin
22 Jan 2003, 8:10 AM
sounds like Cadacus.
on 1969 by w~* ATHENA *~w
22 Jan 2003, 12:17 AM
Give it up.
on To Find the Words by loneshadow29
22 Jan 2003, 12:13 AM
Awwwwww. Sweet. Have you run out and fallen in love. Paxil is the secret to success
replying on poemrancour by JakeBike
21 Jan 2003, 12:14 PM
Excuse me kind sir, but I do indeede own the copyright on this. See patent #58316251, section 16, verse 7, sentence three. So I must ask you to either put a trademark symbol after it, put it in quotations with a footnote and biographical reference to myself, or simply send me USD26.37 for the usage fee. I accept cash, check, visa, and mastercard. Thank you sir. I appreciate your cooperation in advance.
replying on No future by Freethinker1602
17 Jan 2003, 1:13 PM
This coming from the king of mindless self parody. Obviously, you failed to read the poem. So, fuck you, turkey.
on The Poop Machines by dougsoderstrom
16 Jan 2003, 10:43 PM
Duh. So we need a college educated man to spell it out for the masses? Is that it? Please, what was your purpose in writing this.
on Turmoil by ThoughtfulSoul
16 Jan 2003, 10:31 PM
Nice sentiment. Bad poem.
on Life As a Boat by dougsoderstrom
16 Jan 2003, 10:30 PM
Bummer.
on Trespasser at the Men's Bathing Pond by Christof
16 Jan 2003, 10:30 PM
Maybe it is because I have never had the pleasure of going to a men's bathing pond, but that first image confuses me to no end. Can you explain it?
on Perversions 3: Payback by razorgrin
16 Jan 2003, 10:04 PM
Are you talking about Ed Gein?
anyway...
You need serious help
this poem isn't worth the time and effort you spent to think up....
an moral impression of wasted space
anyway...
You need serious help
this poem isn't worth the time and effort you spent to think up....
an moral impression of wasted space
on No future by Freethinker1602
16 Jan 2003, 9:58 PM
Pimple poem, super sized!
on Drunk Satan by smlink84
16 Jan 2003, 9:49 PM
Pointless gibberish.
replying on All you can eat by flatliner
16 Jan 2003, 1:55 PM
I'm eating pork rinds and doughnuts, glazed with chocolate frosting right now, baby. I will have another two pounds on before dinnertime.
on All you can eat by flatliner
16 Jan 2003, 1:51 PM
You also have a poem called "overweight." Are you fat? I weigh 316 pounds and have to buy two seats when I fly American Airlines. Anyway, I like the title and was excited to read the poem, but was a bit disappointed how you used the extended metaphor. So much for bringing expectations to something.
replying on <{Grasping^Grendals}> by Bachus
16 Jan 2003, 12:55 PM
What a menacing last line. Gardner was pure talent. I miss him. It is also one of the few books you will read where a first person narrator dies. James Dickey's "To the White Sea", being another I remember off the top of my head. It is such an odd technique thing to utilize in a book.
on <{Grasping^Grendals}> by Bachus
16 Jan 2003, 11:35 AM
Have you read "Grendal" by John Gardner?
on Anchored pockets by INTRANSIT
14 Jan 2003, 11:18 PM
Another adverbial clause. They are everywhere. You know, Intransit, I am proud of you. You are up to 13 poems now and have yet to pull them all off.