on A Dangling Poo by zodiac
31 Mar 2004, 7:22 PM
dude......
on Watching The Rose Grow by Blindpoetry
31 Mar 2004, 6:37 PM
You did fore the rhyme, but still it flows well.
replying on The Hell With Growing Up by wilco
31 Mar 2004, 5:10 PM
You're pretty funny and make good sense when you're not being an ass.
replying on The Hell With Growing Up by wilco
31 Mar 2004, 4:55 PM
I understood what you were saying. My, you ARE in rare form tonight. By the way, can you (or anyone else reading this) explain to me where the satisfaction lies for these people that log in anonymously and give themselves 10s? Off the subject, I know, but I was wondering...
replying on The Hell With Growing Up by wilco
31 Mar 2004, 4:26 PM
That's funny. I was just about to reply with amazement that you gave a serious reccomendation, devoid of any (or, at least minimal)smart-assed comments. That struck me as unusual. Appreciated anyway.
replying on The Hell With Growing Up by wilco
31 Mar 2004, 4:03 PM
No, what?
replying on The Hell With Growing Up by wilco
31 Mar 2004, 3:57 PM
Ok.....
1) You don't believe what? That I've driven too fast? That I've used drugs? That I've had sex with strangers? Who didn't do these things when they were in high school and college?
2) I'm not saying that I've found Jesus and I'm not condemning these things. In fact, I'm saying that I wish that I could still do them.
1) You don't believe what? That I've driven too fast? That I've used drugs? That I've had sex with strangers? Who didn't do these things when they were in high school and college?
2) I'm not saying that I've found Jesus and I'm not condemning these things. In fact, I'm saying that I wish that I could still do them.
replying on The Hell With Growing Up by wilco
31 Mar 2004, 3:10 PM
What does it matter?
replying on Another Fucking Slow, Sad Song by wilco
30 Mar 2004, 12:48 PM
Actually, it sounds pretty good with the music. Putting a capo on the 5th fret gives it a sad feel. The music makes it.
replying on where to go by AskittlesK
24 Mar 2004, 4:10 PM
Yes, my dear girl, Poetry.com is (essentially) a scam.
replying on New Years Eve, 1999 by wilco
24 Mar 2004, 1:41 PM
lol. No problem...you ARE somewhat right. ;)
replying on New Years Eve, 1999 by wilco
23 Mar 2004, 1:21 PM
I'm 25 now and it is hard to revise (at least for me) mainly because I have trouble going back to the place where I was when I wrote it and everything that I come up with to change it sounds too forced.
on Quiet Lakes by Fear of Garbage
23 Mar 2004, 1:16 PM
I like this one.
replying on A Permanent Fixture by wilco
23 Mar 2004, 1:14 PM
Yes, I wrote this one about 2 years ago during the summer. It's hard to touch up the older ones because I feel like I need to have the same feeling and be in the same place as when I wrote it. And, you're right, I do often tend to screw up the endings. ;)
on Untitled *involves taking pills and cutting with razors* by AskittlesK
21 Mar 2004, 4:36 PM
I sincerely hope that you're not really cutting yourself....but if you are then I would like to make the suggestion (perhaps unwanted) that you see your doctor about getting some antidepressants that ARE yours. I did like your poem though, by the way.
replying on New Years Eve, 1999 by wilco
18 Mar 2004, 8:46 PM
Do you mean shittier?
replying on New Years Eve, 1999 by wilco
18 Mar 2004, 3:03 PM
Hmmmmmm. You think it sounds like I gave up? Well, you may be right. It was supposed to be the realization that there is a new year ahead...full of possibility. Still, the word etched does kind of bring it down, as you mentioned. It WAS written when I was 20 years old. Perhaps it does need revision...I'll think on it...thanks.
on Hope, Approximately by wilco
10 Mar 2004, 7:43 PM
I am sick as I write this, so it might not make any sense. If not.....sorry.
replying on The Cessation of Fidelity by wilco
9 Mar 2004, 2:03 PM
Are they good? They look kind of like morticians...