Comments bywilco, 701–720 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

on La théologie pour les Politiciens by wilco 8 Apr 2004, 7:15 PM
I can't believe I've gotten no "guffs" and no irate rants from Zodiac....feeling left out....
on SEASON OF WINTER by galaxy4unknown 8 Apr 2004, 6:29 AM
Yes, you need to fix the spelling errors, and I would not use "thou" so much (if at all).
replying on Diary by wilco 7 Apr 2004, 8:03 PM
It was just the way I had it indented....In Word, every line was indented a tab space past the previous one in a sideways V pattern with the (Haiku?) thingie in the middle....but, alas, it was not meant to be so the hell with it.
replying on Alive within the sound of life by Prince of Void 6 Apr 2004, 7:09 PM
hmmm, yes I could see where it would be hard to incest your spell-checker....maybe just invest in one, instead.
on A Quick Lick Of Yellow by Jeremi B. Handrinos 6 Apr 2004, 1:34 PM
nice. You don't hear much about old Ra and Osiris these days...I wonder what they're up to?
on Over you by tre 6 Apr 2004, 1:24 PM
Been there.
on Diary by wilco 5 Apr 2004, 8:49 PM
This used to have a cool little off kilter structure but the poemranker submit box would'nt let me do it....stupid poemranker submit box.....
Not a bad poem, but I think that you need to incest in Microsoft Word simply for the spell-checker. I've found that it helps!
replying on Daddy's Little Girl by daveslady 3 Apr 2004, 8:29 PM
well said.
on Wartner by unouluvme 2 Apr 2004, 7:55 PM
fashizzle my nizzle.
on It Won't Last Long by Spindle 2 Apr 2004, 7:50 PM
At first, I thought this was about joining the Army and going through boot camp....
on Price of an Affair by sonawrote 2 Apr 2004, 7:49 PM
-2 for self-loathing
+8 for self-loathing
replying on Don't Cry, Sharon Tate by wilco 2 Apr 2004, 7:45 PM
lol
on Cargo pants by tre 2 Apr 2004, 12:42 PM
This is a cute little story..
replying on Don't Cry, Sharon Tate by wilco 2 Apr 2004, 11:55 AM
Check out the book "Helter, Skelter" by Vincent Bugliosi...or rent the movie if you're not into books. The movie is not great, though....
on A Special K by OfaRevolutionAJD 1 Apr 2004, 9:02 PM
You should send this to Creed...I bet they'd buy it.
on How does it feel? by OfaRevolutionAJD 1 Apr 2004, 8:59 PM
Sorry, but the way you have this structured makes it hard to read....
replying on Don't Cry, Sharon Tate by wilco 1 Apr 2004, 8:24 PM
The B movie actree murdered by Charles Manson's crew
on hands by New Life Drug 1 Apr 2004, 12:37 PM
I kind of dig this....
replying on The Hell With Growing Up by wilco 31 Mar 2004, 9:13 PM
Hey, you get it.