Comments bywilco, 681–700 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

replying on reflection by xunitedx 20 Apr 2004, 4:20 PM
When I filled the salt shaker with glue,
She beat me, beat me with her shoe.
replying on reflection by xunitedx 20 Apr 2004, 1:35 PM
Balley's is also a Riverboat Gambling Hall in Tunica! (although it's with an e, but it sounds the same..)
replying on Moving Forward In Reverse (For Ann) by wilco 19 Apr 2004, 1:38 PM
Actually, I have no music to go with this yet, and to be honest, I don't know that I'm going to write any. This might should have been called a free verse, but it kind of felt like a lyric....so here we are. If I do write any music for it, though, you'll be the first to know.
replying on Moving Forward In Reverse (For Ann) by wilco 19 Apr 2004, 1:22 PM
what the hell?
replying on Moving Forward In Reverse (For Ann) by wilco 19 Apr 2004, 1:21 PM
Thanks for the feedback, H. I think, though, that to change these lines as you have suggested (and good suggestions they are) would change the meaning of said lines too much. And thanks for pointing out the punctuation error in the room line.
replying on Moving Forward In Reverse (For Ann) by wilco 19 Apr 2004, 1:19 PM
I see the punctuation error in the room line but to change the other lines as you have suggested (while they are good ideas)would, in my eyes, change the meaning of the line. I do appreciate your input, though, H.
replying on Do You Like It by hotwire 18 Apr 2004, 8:34 PM
hmmm....good enough I guess..but I'm going to have to change it to a 9 until I hear her sing it..
replying on Do You Like It by hotwire 18 Apr 2004, 8:25 PM
That is....assuming that you're female. If not, I'll have to change it to a 0.
on nonsense by sarah 18 Apr 2004, 8:05 PM
This is a good idea and a good poem. To be nitpicky, though, I think you mean Rorschach.
on Do You Like It by hotwire 18 Apr 2004, 7:52 PM
As a man, I cannot help but give this a 10.
replying on La théologie pour les Politiciens by wilco 18 Apr 2004, 6:09 PM
all right. much better.
replying on La théologie pour les Politiciens by wilco 18 Apr 2004, 5:07 PM
I feel much better, thanks. But if it makes you feel any better...at least you are one of the few people who's irate rants make any sense....
replying on Suicide Girl by wilco 18 Apr 2004, 7:46 AM
hmmm...let me ponder that for a while...
replying on Suicide Girl by wilco 17 Apr 2004, 9:05 PM
better? no? well.....
replying on Pretend by EvenPicturesFade 17 Apr 2004, 8:38 PM
Being fake is one of the few things that we all have in common.
on Riding High On My Ignore List by horus8 15 Apr 2004, 3:41 PM
I don't really get a lot of it either, but it's funny as hell.
replying on Field Trip by wilco 13 Apr 2004, 7:39 PM
Thanks. I don't think so either.
I kind of like this.....very....abstract?
on Three Bears by hotwire 9 Apr 2004, 10:03 PM
YEs, it is different but the grammatical errors to make it a little hard to read in places.
replying on Jesus Rises from the Grove by wilco 9 Apr 2004, 9:58 PM
It's being made into a feature film starring Antonio Banderas and George Lopez.