replying on Rambling by terbenaw
24 Feb 2006, 2:17 PM
Guess I'll try it...
on Gaia and Man by Blue Magpie
24 Feb 2006, 1:42 PM
I enjoyed this. It's a bit long, but for some reason, it seems to fit in it's current form. I like the creativity used with the end rhymes, but, I feel that it has limited the scope of the poem in some ways as well. All in all though... this is excellent.
replying on AIDS in a van by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
2 May 2004, 1:51 PM
Oh BTW: I wrote Pain and Depression when I was about 13.
replying on AIDS in a van by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
2 May 2004, 1:50 PM
Sorry DA... I don't even LISTEN to Nine Inch Nails... I'm a hip-hop head DumbAss.
on A Flower for Monet by Shuushin
1 May 2004, 3:01 PM
Beautiful wordplay... well thought out... beautiful overall.
on AIDS in a van by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
1 May 2004, 2:50 PM
I give you a TEN... minus ten. Heh.
You're not a very nice person, and your poetry follows your attitude - it's not nice either.
You're not a very nice person, and your poetry follows your attitude - it's not nice either.
replying on Depression by terbenaw
23 Mar 2004, 1:38 PM
I sorry, but may you clarify the meaning of your message?