replying on Lips no longer innocent by tre
15 May 2004, 5:37 AM
Who the hell are you?
on Twilight Affair by thepinkbunnyofdoom
13 Apr 2004, 6:26 PM
good job expressing the emotions, this is amazing
on Almost One by thepinkbunnyofdoom
13 Apr 2004, 6:07 PM
absolutely loved it.
on lost memories by ggawrysi
11 Apr 2004, 10:51 PM
i hate to go along with the crowd, but u deserved a 10...u surprised me. good job.
on self indulgent teenage-style poem needed to spew out. by Roisin
11 Apr 2004, 10:48 PM
ive been thru this exactly. good job.
on short clip about dc, #2 by jsd
11 Apr 2004, 10:41 PM
very kool, i like it :)
on My Day Off by wilco
11 Apr 2004, 7:22 PM
awesome poem, i love the line about zodiaz, he keeps pullin down my poems ;( keep it up, and dont forget to read mine
replying on Cabbagetown will miss you by tre
8 Apr 2004, 12:53 AM
i fixed the three's to Three's, had to. anyways crazy, this IS more prose, but thats how i wanted to write it, a eulogy if u will....i can see how i could make it better for a better poem, thanks anyway B....good critique, ..except for the part where u tried to rewrite my entire stanza!
on The Girl With the Tye-Dyed Hair by wilco
6 Apr 2004, 12:14 PM
u got some guts, again, a great poem
on Don't Cry, Sharon Tate by wilco
6 Apr 2004, 12:12 PM
I love it, crazy story huh?
on To those who'd share their heartfelt feelings with the world by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
2 Apr 2004, 12:24 PM
then what are we supposed to write about?
on Search Engine by OneFingerAnswer
2 Apr 2004, 9:06 AM
i like it
on I hope not by colndodg
2 Apr 2004, 9:03 AM
love it, im an atheist!
on First move by aliena
2 Apr 2004, 8:59 AM
know what you mean
replying on Cargo pants by tre
2 Apr 2004, 8:54 AM
thanks :) thats all i want to do..reach people with my life...look forward to reading some of yours
on scabs by Crakyamuni
30 Mar 2004, 12:52 PM
reminds me of an old friendship that went to hell