Comments byedpeterson, 341–360 back. Include replies

on Being by horus8 10 Apr 2004, 6:36 AM
hi horus8. pretty good one here. and one that i have not seen before, but contains a good dose of wisdom and a dash of bitterness. well done .
on may 18 by Bill Z Bub 10 Apr 2004, 7:24 AM
enigmatic, but fresh and a little dark.. . good poem though. wording is very fresh and appealing.
on Invasion by INTRANSIT 10 Apr 2004, 7:27 AM
hahah, funny. Lingered toward the garage?? strange and, somewhat ineffectual word choice there. How does one linger toward something?
on The Unholiest Sonnet Ever by horus8 11 Apr 2004, 7:33 AM
funny. I have no fucking idea whom you are addressing with this one, but it doesn't really matter. ONe asshat is the same as the next.
HAHAHAHAHAHA.
on some deleted poem 11 Apr 2004, 11:06 AM
cloaks would be good, if you dont mind the potentially negative "hiding" connotation.
on Diary by wilco 12 Apr 2004, 6:53 AM
i think it is pretty damn good. simple. ONly just shy of elegant.
on Everyone's choosing sides by zodiac 12 Apr 2004, 8:16 AM
Excellent piece.
on The Poemranker Poe-lease by Jeremi B. Handrinos 12 Apr 2004, 10:19 AM
funny, but i have not been here long enough to know what the fuck you are talking about. go down on your bad self.
on Diary entry (edit) by richa 13 Apr 2004, 6:28 AM
I kinda like it. Quick sad statement on misinterpretation, that could easily be misinterpreted. LOL,. The wet leaf has no choice but to let go.

this is kinda funny in a way.
on Ballad for a bad Irish accent by zodiac 13 Apr 2004, 6:40 AM
pretty funny
Jeremi B. Handrinos? LOL.
on ex by TheLegacy 13 Apr 2004, 9:02 AM
pretty good write, but not a haiku. It seems like it might be a hook for a longer poem.
on some deleted poem 14 Apr 2004, 5:39 AM
I think this one is good. where are they...should be easy to spot, seems a bit clumsy.

And i almost did not click when i read the title, glad i did though.
on Under Cans by oftherealm 14 Apr 2004, 8:05 AM
funny
on 7 Days of Suicide by dragonfly 14 Apr 2004, 12:44 PM
Funny.