on The Because Collection by INTRANSIT
14 Mar 2005, 6:51 AM
52 card pick-up
on Poet, Earth mover by INTRANSIT
9 Mar 2005, 4:16 PM
of a tractor's or
of tractors'
of tractors'
on some deleted poem
7 Mar 2005, 10:46 AM
funny
on some deleted poem
7 Mar 2005, 10:47 AM
If only you could find a way to introduce some ass buggery.
on You Fell Asleep First by jessicazee
7 Mar 2005, 10:53 AM
Liked it better before. The language seemed clearer. The stuff you have added is interesting, but poorly worded, imho.
on The Reply by LintyWeenis
7 Mar 2005, 10:56 AM
Can't say I loved the poem, but I cannot give less than a 10 to "LintyWeenis"
on Fat girls Who Wear Short Skirts During Winter Quarter by DurtKL
8 Mar 2005, 9:59 AM
yah. this gives me a chubby.
on Disable by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
8 Mar 2005, 5:32 PM
I would like to request a link to one of your P.I. Readings, as recommended to me by jeremi, horus8, and the 3 or 4 other names he has on this site. I hear they are the highest imaginable art, and would love to sample.
on Poet, Earth mover by INTRANSIT
9 Mar 2005, 7:22 AM
one pause to mimic....
I like it. the first stanza is unnecessarily difficult, especially while we try to decode "portently"
I like it. the first stanza is unnecessarily difficult, especially while we try to decode "portently"
on eat what you want. by burgerking33
9 Mar 2005, 7:29 AM
NO! Don't eat that burger, Don't eat that ice cream!
Give it to me!
Give it to me!
on The Snow Globe by Caducus
10 Mar 2005, 10:46 AM
how about "borne on her tears? "
I would remove 'weeping' from the last stanza, maybe more.
there is a power to this. I like it a lot.
I would remove 'weeping' from the last stanza, maybe more.
there is a power to this. I like it a lot.
on bleeding by crooked_smile
12 Mar 2005, 10:03 AM
frightful
on some deleted poem
13 Mar 2005, 9:14 AM
Thank you for not trying to rhyme in this one.
on an unbiased voice (or the most biased one you'll hear) by i_am_the_popsicle
14 Mar 2005, 7:14 AM
This is almost completely illegible. Is English your native language? (I hope not)
on The Lonely Man by i_am_the_popsicle
14 Mar 2005, 5:29 PM
This is a bulging turnip.
"Frankly I'd rather fair my chances among men." What could this mean?
their?
"their are two testaments." Please pick out the egregious crime against language contained this phrase.
clearly "testaments" should be "testicles"
"Frankly I'd rather fair my chances among men." What could this mean?
their?
"their are two testaments." Please pick out the egregious crime against language contained this phrase.
clearly "testaments" should be "testicles"
on The Glass by dancin_n_da_moonlite
14 Mar 2005, 5:33 PM
A G Q X R Z T G G W T
s i q x u g g w w a a
on The Glass by dancin_n_da_moonlite
14 Mar 2005, 5:34 PM
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