poemranker ::20 most recent comments by edpeterson (61-80)

Comments byedpeterson, 61–80 back. Include replies

on Zin/Enough/Things/Squeeze/Flow by gregsamsa222 25 Feb 2005, 6:06 AM
The poem: Brilliant. The order is perfect as is the length.
on Little Fly by PodPoet 23 Feb 2005, 8:17 AM
LOL. Fucking hilarious.
on some deleted poem 23 Feb 2005, 8:45 AM
a shoe's embrace is kinda funny. and the title is funny too. IN fact, the whole thing is kinda funny.
on some deleted poem 23 Feb 2005, 8:07 AM
I love to laugh, long and loud and clear
It's getting worse every year

"Longing that this is not a one time event"
I think you do this on purpose, just to see what the critics will say.
on some deleted poem 23 Feb 2005, 8:10 AM
i have misplaced my decoder ring.
on Hunger 2 by Dovina 27 Feb 2005, 9:24 AM
I would vote, but I have no idea what this is. It might be very good, but it is written in a language I do not speak.
on For Junior by PodPoet 1 Mar 2005, 8:14 AM
The best poem ever written. -10-
on The Gentleman by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 1 Mar 2005, 12:28 PM
A mountainous mass of crawling yak shit. You, sir, would not know a gentleman from a training bra. I bid you good day!
on Amphetamine Witches & Scrabble by Bachus 2 Mar 2005, 5:49 PM
..."in the paddleboat of our endless love"
on Wise Clogg! by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 3 Mar 2005, 8:56 PM
I have never had occasion to read such gut wrenching commments beneath a poeme in my wasted life.
on March 3,2005/I lost someone by RION12 4 Mar 2005, 11:31 AM
What a coincidence! I too am listening to some very soft and sad music right this very moment. I seem to have lost my blacket, though. You're gay.

Please, end the buffoonery.
on Woman on the Stairs by James Rykelangeli 4 Mar 2005, 11:32 AM
and then he pulled it out and made her smoke it.
on 6 bloody mary's/2 cups of Rossi by Crakyamuni 4 Mar 2005, 11:36 AM
I love the way you rhyme mind with mind. It is stench. very nice.
Well, if nothing else, at least this puddle of poorly executed drivel has sparked another masterpiece from
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.

For providing the impetus for his his comment, I applaud you, and, really, I should vote 10 on this asinine ramble based on his comment alone. But I cannot, in good conscience, do so.
on Fastso by Dovina 5 Mar 2005, 8:42 AM
Well, it may have gone on a bit, but the first stanza made me guffaw with a recklessness I had not known since middle school. I think I will give you a real vote on this one, as it is a nice change-up from that programming hunger bullshit. You have earned it with what I percieve to be genuine repentance. Forgiveness is yours my child.
on A Dozen Roses by jroday 4 Mar 2005, 4:10 PM
The seventh rose holds the caring I give so full and free

I could be wrong, but I think you mean "hose"
on Pain by DaRkMoOnLuVeR 4 Mar 2005, 4:15 PM
LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL.

Brilliant. Should be a "pimple"
on Pain by DaRkMoOnLuVeR 4 Mar 2005, 4:16 PM
at least by the bay.

that's just bloody good writing.
on We Have Nothing to Talk About by jessicazee 4 Mar 2005, 4:18 PM
stiff as a board.
on Fastso by Dovina 5 Mar 2005, 8:44 AM
ahhh.. those were the good old days when I could lie back on the sofa of an afternoon and slag away, unimpeded by the demanding task of critiquing poemes.