| Re: Don't Say You Understand by cuddlytiger17 |
wilco 24.176.102.131 |
21-May-04/5:55 PM |
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This is MUCH better. Is this a new one that you wrote?
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| Re: Old Friends by sliver |
electroman1979 198.81.26.16 |
21-May-04/8:10 PM |
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good poem, i wish them well as well
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| Re: Just A Thought by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
cuddlytiger17 64.80.244.188 |
21-May-04/9:47 PM |
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I really liked this...It's good!
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| Re: Optimism, pessimism and my quarter theory by INTRANSIT |
cuddlytiger17 64.80.244.188 |
21-May-04/10:01 PM |
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This is great! hehe. Definately my kind of poem! ~10~
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| Re: All the things i hate by Mutant_X |
cuddlytiger17 64.80.244.188 |
21-May-04/10:12 PM |
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This is waaay too much like the lines from the movie Ten Things I Hate About You!!!!
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| Re: Don't Say You Understand by cuddlytiger17 |
thepinkbunnyofdoom 216.196.144.170 |
21-May-04/11:02 PM |
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There is so much more that could have been displayed here. It seems you focus your words like a bullet, but you limit the meaning by using a weak hand gun.
he gained an enemy,
Lost a love, and destroyed himself
All in the same day
Oh yeah, I do understand. Those lines are beautiful. I have. March 7th 2004. -9-
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| Re: Ten by horus8 |
thepinkbunnyofdoom 216.196.147.170 |
21-May-04/11:24 PM |
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You never cease to amaze.
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| Re: Dial Tone by cuddlytiger17 |
thepinkbunnyofdoom 216.196.147.170 |
21-May-04/11:35 PM |
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hmmm...
seems a little lacking of... Something... Like substance, not so much depth more... purpose or drive, but I'm looking for a better word...
Damn it.
Someone able to help me figure what this lacks?
No vote for now.
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| Re: The Unseen by cuddlytiger17 |
thepinkbunnyofdoom 216.196.147.170 |
21-May-04/11:43 PM |
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Allow your eye to do the only bleeding you cause yourself. Tears work so much better...
Trust me I know...
I almost married a "cutter"
-8-
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| Re: Battered and Bruised by erickvisions |
thepinkbunnyofdoom 216.196.147.170 |
21-May-04/11:51 PM |
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Saddism, bad. Pimple/Lyrics(Hint: what this really is) need work. Way too much focus on ryhme. emotion, worked it up but not in any interestingly new style. -4-
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| Re: Old Friends by sliver |
thepinkbunnyofdoom 216.196.147.170 |
21-May-04/11:53 PM |
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| Re: Jade Milieu by Enkidu |
thepinkbunnyofdoom 216.196.147.170 |
21-May-04/11:55 PM |
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Matter Piece. Absolute Matter!!! -9-
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| Re: can't take the heat? by peaceseeker |
thepinkbunnyofdoom 216.196.147.170 |
21-May-04/11:58 PM |
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Welcome to Hell's Kitchen
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
thepinkbunnyofdoom 216.196.147.170 |
21-May-04/11:59 PM |
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| Re: Litany by zodiac |
thepinkbunnyofdoom 216.196.147.170 |
22-May-04/12:01 AM |
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
MacFrantic 198.81.26.15 |
22-May-04/12:10 AM |
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Very Steve Martin monologue, "Cruel Shoes'-esque.
Well done *9*
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| Re: The Negro by Everyone |
titan69 213.48.74.7 |
22-May-04/12:55 AM |
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O yer so youv seen ROOTS as well. 6/10 for observation.
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| Re: Ten by horus8 |
Shuushin 207.5.211.177 |
22-May-04/5:24 AM |
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A fresh thought well said.
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Sasha 69.138.236.63 |
22-May-04/9:22 AM |
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I'll give you a ten as a prize for the most vote self-inflation on record
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
Sasha 69.138.236.63 |
22-May-04/9:22 AM |
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I like the part about the nipple clamps though
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