Re: Focus by Signature	Stephen Robins 213.146.148.199	21-May-04/7:53 AM
This poem is a pool of rancid flange juice left on the seat of a sunshine bus by an elderly citizen.
Re: Tony Blair's sagging purple johnny by Stephen Robins	wFraser Allonby Q.C.w 195.157.153.253	21-May-04/8:17 AM
Shuperb. Really shuperb. By the way, I've just taken delivery of a case of this: http://tinyurl.com/2anck It's very reasonably priced for such an excellent wine. I suggest you order a case or two yourself.
regarding some deleted poem...	Stephen Robins 213.146.148.199	21-May-04/8:23 AM
Yet more splendid poetry? -1-
Re: Oomphless by shwenatjadeflower	Signature 4.46.141.40	21-May-04/3:21 AM
I would add a,'still' after "is" in the 2nd to last line and then make it the last line. But well done
Re: Something's gone wrong by zodiac	Shuushin 207.5.211.177	21-May-04/3:45 AM
eh. I thik you did some wrong things in here on purpose, but its popular; generated lots of interest and votes - so 3 points for that.
Re: The Ballad of Fraser Allonby Q.C., Barrister-At-Law by wFraser Allonby Q.C.w	Nicholas Jones 137.44.1.30	21-May-04/4:25 AM
Have you been watching Cavanagh QC?
Re: Reflections of the Living Dead by SomeKindofPoet	zodiac 67.240.192.209	21-May-04/6:05 AM
The worst thing about this poem isn't that it's about religion. It's that you're either A) the world's biggest failure for allowing yourself to remain "reprobate" when you know how you should act/believe to be saved, or B) the world's biggest failure for presuming to know what reprobates think when you are not, in fact, one of them. If A) better describes you, why don't you just take control of your life, you ninny? If B) is closer to the truth (and I'll bet it is) why don't you write about something you actually know instead of casting your exceedingly self-righteous presumptions around like swollen buttocks? As it happens, I'm probably utterly reprobate, and yet my life isn't anything like this. In fact, every reprobate I know isn't like that. In any event, in your current form, you fail.
Re: Focus by Signature	zodiac 67.240.192.209	21-May-04/6:09 AM
Why did you put this poem on your own favorites list?
regarding some deleted poem...	Stephen Robins 213.146.148.199	21-May-04/8:40 AM
Still shit.
regarding some deleted poem...	sliver 63.190.80.239	21-May-04/9:41 AM
O.K, time for my input. Give a little more volume to the poem, fill it up so the rhyme scheme doesn't sound forced to the magus. Good Idea for a poem tho.
Re: Unwed by gilded in gold	Fear of Garbage 156.63.85.15	21-May-04/11:19 AM
I side with zodiac. Although I'm not known for understandable poetry, this is beyond even me.
Re: Opera by ~incarnate~	Signature 4.46.141.40	21-May-04/12:16 PM
Yes, between sexy and simple there lies a fine line. Yet this peice may not cut the mustard. C for effort.
regarding some deleted poem...	Signature 4.46.141.40	21-May-04/12:20 PM
A man after my own heart. Keep it grity.
Re: Bed by gilded in gold	sliver 63.190.73.252	21-May-04/12:31 PM
Hard for my limited mind to follow. But I think I like what it says about a child's soul.(Personal interpretation)
Re: Let Me Swing by caitydee	wilco 24.176.102.131	21-May-04/1:23 PM
not too bad.
Re: Tony Blair's sagging purple johnny by Stephen Robins	Shuushin 147.154.235.53	21-May-04/1:23 PM
Another diaper-full of the best you can do. And you spelled "color" wrong, again.
Re: Balance by Signature	wilco 24.176.102.131	21-May-04/1:25 PM
No vote - because you voted on your own poem.
Re: Tony Blair's sagging purple johnny by Stephen Robins	wilco 24.176.102.131	21-May-04/1:42 PM
Does it ever get old being a bargain-basement -=Dark_Angel=-?
Re: To Think I Am by SomeKindofPoet	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 163.1.146.16	21-May-04/2:51 PM
All your opinions are wrong, you colossal dunce. Thanks, -10-
Re: Root Shallow by Miggy	capachijim 64.12.116.140	21-May-04/5:32 PM
it's a 10