Re: Fear by Phalkon	Tintagiles 142.166.250.141	20-May-04/7:00 PM
Heavens. The intellectual and literary ninnyness makes the mind reel.
Re: I Can't Wait Till Christmas Day Resubmission by Teen14	Tintagiles 142.166.250.141	20-May-04/7:01 PM
Gadzooks. Beyond commentary.
Re: Catharsis by wilco	Tintagiles 142.166.250.141	20-May-04/7:02 PM
Zounds. Up a bottle of wine. No wonder you feel like you're going to fall down the staircase.
Re: I cannot take this shit(please comment and critique) by TrulyUnique0642	Tintagiles 142.166.250.141	20-May-04/7:04 PM
Let me assure you that it is much kinder if I neither comment nor critique.
Re: Fugly by Freethinker1602	Tintagiles 142.166.250.141	20-May-04/7:05 PM
'Sblood. 'Tis terrible.
Re: Catharsis by wilco	Jeremi B. Handrinos 24.130.62.63	20-May-04/8:09 PM
I've broken the nudity record.
Re: Fugly by Freethinker1602	Jeremi B. Handrinos 24.130.62.63	20-May-04/8:10 PM
Plucky
regarding some deleted poem...	Jeremi B. Handrinos 24.130.62.63	20-May-04/8:11 PM
Saha's so cool
Re: Bed by gilded in gold	Jeremi B. Handrinos 24.130.62.63	20-May-04/8:14 PM
Sponge, yes, brilliant... 2.
Re: Let Me Swing by caitydee	caitydee 64.12.116.70	20-May-04/10:36 PM
This is a work in progress-but I wanted some feedback, thanks!
Re: Mourning Glory by William Delacroix	Signature 4.46.141.40	21-May-04/12:24 AM
Beautiful title. I like the intrigue of the piece, although i dont like the usage of the 3rd stanza in union with the Glosa theme. But the overall structure and concept works pretty nicely, given the difficulty. Also it seemed to putter out due 2 maybe trying 2 hard towards the end, its too predictable. I think it needs a surprising climax, given that the reader( if they know the style ) knows what line will conclude. You did a great job of elaborating the founding peice and throwing a creepy twist in while you were at it. Kudos _Da1
Re: Blackened Cauldron by Ellie95	Signature 4.46.141.40	21-May-04/12:28 AM
Ohhh. K. Obsess much?
Re: All the things i hate by Mutant_X	SomeKindofPoet 216.176.16.122	21-May-04/12:31 AM
Hm...reminds me of "Ten Things I Hate About You" Good idea, however, I'm not much on free verse unless it has a rhythm to it...that would be my advice. -SKoP
Re: How I fuck Freud off in the shower by horus8	Signature 4.46.141.40	21-May-04/12:48 AM
DISGUSTINGLY DELICIOUS!
Re: Something's gone wrong by zodiac	Signature 4.46.141.40	21-May-04/12:57 AM
Captivating and satisfying. You get a gold star for today.
Re: Bon Voyage by Jeremi B. Handrinos	Signature 4.46.141.40	21-May-04/1:01 AM
Unique
Re: Just A Thought by thepinkbunnyofdoom	Signature 4.46.141.40	21-May-04/1:09 AM
Very representative. I can relate and am entranced with the approach of this peice. Nicely done, although the repetition may be a bit much. Any how it suffices. _Da1
Re: To be titled by Horus8(Craft's Service) by thepinkbunnyofdoom	Signature 4.46.141.40	21-May-04/2:36 AM
Special
Re: Let Me Swing by caitydee	Signature 4.46.141.40	21-May-04/2:42 AM
Are you still together? Or is that an appropriate question? I would cahnge "Our bodies fit that day--We fit", maybe, " Our bodies, we fit on that day. Other than that its cool.
Re: Re-drafting by Nicholas Jones	Signature 4.46.141.40	21-May-04/2:54 AM
Funny