| Re: Reflections of the Living Dead by SomeKindofPoet |
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 212.219.223.8 |
20-May-04/12:43 AM |
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If this were a poeme narrated by a zombie who was sitting around in an old zombies' home, thinking about the times when he used to go around trying to eat people's brains, and how he saw most of his zombie friends shot in the head, and wondering whether it was all worth it, it would be ace.
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| Re: Reflections of the Living Dead by SomeKindofPoet |
zodiac 67.240.192.193 |
20-May-04/5:28 AM |
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Maybe you can explain something to me, SomeKindofPoet: on Decapolis people are always posting things like,
"Topic: back-stabbing whores
...posted 05-12-2004 09:34 PM
ack!!!! i'm sooooo livid right now. a supposed friend has just stabbed me and several of my friends in the back and horribly so. i'm so glad she's not here or i would most definitely kick the **** out of her... "
and
"like my wife used to always say.... "you can't trust a byatch.""
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"Crap on a crap cracker.
Josh."
What I don't understand is why don't the Jesus Police bust these people's asses posthaste? Is that the way young "hip" Christians talk these days? I don't know about you, but in case of Rapture *this* car will be unoccupied. Thanks.
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| Re: Back to Sorrow by justjay |
gilded in gold 141.151.1.100 |
20-May-04/5:59 AM |
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i'd say all i grab ARE the links again...
sorry....
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| Re: Unwed by gilded in gold |
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 163.1.146.16 |
20-May-04/7:02 AM |
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Hauntingly beautiful. I really like your use of "face in hiding" as a metaphor for leprosy. -10-
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| Re: A Civil Saving Strain by Enkidu |
francis nor capule 210.23.227.51 |
20-May-04/8:33 AM |
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this is nice... we shall never know...
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
francis nor capule 210.23.227.51 |
20-May-04/8:37 AM |
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| Re: Fear by Phalkon |
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 163.1.146.16 |
20-May-04/6:22 AM |
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Fear (Free verse) by Phalkon
i lay awake in bed
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a million thoughts run through my head
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Thoughts (Free verse) by nicole081083
As I lie here in my bed
Many thoughts run through my head
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wait for sleep (Lyric) by xunitedx
i wait for sleep as i'm lying in my bed
but i can't stop these thoughts from running through my head
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Insomnia (Pimple) by BiggRobb
Every night that I lay down to bed,
I'm constantly bombarded with thoughts racing through my head;
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Adam's Apple (Lyric) by hotwire
Not enough words rush through my head
as I laid spend there in my bed
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Falling in Love (Free verse) by disturbedone182
I lie awake for hours upon my bed
While thoughts of her race through my head
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untitled: dedicated to my soldier/husband (Free verse) by SweetJuliet10
sitting here tonight alone in bed
a million things running through my head
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| Re: Baba Yaga by w~* ATHENA *~w |
Bobjim 213.122.106.133 |
20-May-04/8:58 AM |
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Oh how simply marvellous darling. 6
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| Re: Re-drafting by Nicholas Jones |
wFraser Allonby Q.C.w 195.157.153.253 |
20-May-04/9:59 AM |
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How did it feel to win the Melben G. Glasscock Center for Humanities Research Prize in Historical Literary Studies?
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| Re: love comes but once by francis nor capule |
zodiac 67.240.211.73 |
20-May-04/10:10 AM |
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Do you really know that love comes but once, or are you just saying that because it sounds poetic and preformulated? And how would you know that, anyway?
By my own count, love has come for me about seven times - unless you really mean *cum*, in which case, sadly, the correct figure is never.
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| Re: Fighting before bed by zodiac |
gilded in gold 151.197.184.188 |
20-May-04/11:02 AM |
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the last 6 lines are good.
you need to maybe not use huge words together..
"crass nomenclature,
warm in our eiderdown plicature."
it really, really cuts up the flow. so there!
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| Re: Hmm... by tre |
Tara57 67.93.210.229 |
20-May-04/11:22 AM |
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| Re: Unwed by gilded in gold |
Stephen Robins 195.92.198.72 |
20-May-04/11:33 AM |
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
sliver 63.190.65.54 |
20-May-04/12:50 PM |
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I can't really relate this year, but Colorado is still pretty cool. June'll probably be a cooker. Still I have big tree's beside my house so it's almost always cool inside
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| Re: Unwed by gilded in gold |
sliver 63.190.65.54 |
20-May-04/12:53 PM |
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All moments are painted I think, you just can't always distinguish the colors. I like this, let's see some more?
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| Re: Just Like Before by cuddlytiger17 |
sliver 63.190.65.54 |
20-May-04/12:55 PM |
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Remind me not to piss you off, or teach you how to load black powder.
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| Re: Hmm... by tre |
wilco 24.176.102.131 |
20-May-04/1:10 PM |
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Nope, but I guess there's some meaning to it.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
wilco 24.176.102.131 |
20-May-04/1:16 PM |
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sitting on a steamboat...whittling lemmings...throwing overboard...this could be a blast with the right chemical mixture.
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| Re: done than said by francis nor capule |
wilco 24.176.102.131 |
20-May-04/1:18 PM |
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just a word of advice...stop naming your poems "untitled". Surely you can come up with a name for them. That title just makes the whole thing boring even if it isn't.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
Shuushin 147.154.235.51 |
20-May-04/2:05 PM |
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yes - a break now and then is, as Martha would say, a Good Thing.
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