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Bachus 24.130.62.63 |
22-May-04/7:56 PM |
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| Re: The Path of Least Resistance by eliastemplar |
daniella 24.232.6.112 |
22-May-04/8:34 PM |
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| Re: Old Friends by sliver |
tadpole 24.55.114.92 |
22-May-04/9:42 PM |
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glad to see your poetry again
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| Re: To Paint Acceptance by versus_u |
Lifeboatman 202.163.200.75 |
23-May-04/2:50 AM |
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I never new you were so good at this... and all this time I thought you were a poser like me... 10 for everything...
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| Re: Loving You More Each Day by Katrina |
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 131.111.212.215 |
23-May-04/5:14 AM |
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This is amazing... you must really know what its like to be in love when noone understands you... you put it so perfectly... dont listen to what anyone else tells you, you have a gift and you should never stop writing... 10...
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wilco 24.176.102.131 |
22-May-04/10:49 AM |
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I can't decide if this is about schizophrenia or OCD (both maybe?). At any rate, you seem to have a pretty good grasp of mental disorders...I'm guessing you either have one yourself or know someone who does. This isn't the first one of yours I've read dealing with this subject. Anyway, it's not bad.
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wilco 24.176.102.131 |
22-May-04/9:30 AM |
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strange creatures, cicadas.
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Sasha 69.138.236.63 |
22-May-04/11:53 AM |
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Thank you, Hostileintent, for that anonymous retaliatory Zero. Changing computers doesen't hide the fact that you're still in the SAME BUILDING's IP domain
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| Re: Catharsis by wilco |
Shuushin 207.5.211.177 |
22-May-04/12:35 PM |
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Yep, thats a good one; good use of the form.
Consider replacing "Walking", it's implied and the space could be better used to express the mood.
the wine/mine rhyme, btw is a good coupling and the long "i" sounds work well.
when you say "contemplating a swift descent" are you implying she will go down [on you] quickly (or vice versa), or are you saying something will be leaving soon and quickly?
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Shuushin 207.5.211.177 |
22-May-04/12:54 PM |
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Good form Sasha. I like the topic too - they are strange birds, someone was telling me about them just this week.
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Shuushin 207.5.211.177 |
22-May-04/12:56 PM |
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hey ed, not bad, not bad at all - I'm not crazy about a rhyming cinquain tho.
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Dan garcia-Black 66.159.218.32 |
22-May-04/12:56 PM |
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You must be un-insane to write this. Country or "Yanni-esue?"
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Shuushin 207.5.211.177 |
22-May-04/1:00 PM |
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some deleted user 24.222.81.233 |
22-May-04/1:26 PM |
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A moving family memoir with a beautiful juxtaposition of swollen balls and prisonerâs release. Ace, tops, and cigar.
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| Re: Tony Blair's sagging purple johnny by Stephen Robins |
some deleted user 24.222.81.233 |
22-May-04/1:32 PM |
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A charming take on Our Favorite Midget.
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| Re: Don't Say You Understand by cuddlytiger17 |
some deleted user 24.222.81.233 |
22-May-04/1:42 PM |
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A charming variation on Our Favorite Midget.
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| Re: Focus by Signature |
some deleted user 24.222.81.233 |
22-May-04/1:46 PM |
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A magnetic re-imagining of Our Favorite Midget.
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electroman1979 198.81.26.15 |
22-May-04/1:57 PM |
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and what is this supposed to be??
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| Re: Perversions 7: Viva Las Naked by razorgrin |
nentwined 66.92.183.34 |
22-May-04/3:59 PM |
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I had to look up DVDA. I have to say.
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| Re: Amy by neurula |
nentwined 66.92.183.34 |
22-May-04/4:54 PM |
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that's my amy, all right. :)
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