| Re: At the door by fufuberry |
titan69 62.31.24.124 |
14-May-04/1:08 PM |
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edpeterson 68.79.27.79 |
14-May-04/1:32 PM |
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i cannot imagine anything worse. should easily make the list. that is what you were going for, wasn't it? here is some help. -1-
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| Re: The Ballad of Fraser Allonby Q.C., Barrister-At-Law by wFraser Allonby Q.C.w |
edpeterson 68.79.27.79 |
14-May-04/1:36 PM |
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best poem i ever read -0-
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Shuushin 147.154.235.51 |
14-May-04/1:59 PM |
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--> "unchanged his expression"
can u do something with that?
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| Re: In the Land of Bob by Bobjim |
Shuushin 147.154.235.51 |
14-May-04/2:02 PM |
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| Re: Washing-up Hands and Disgruntled Underarms by fevriere |
Shuushin 147.154.235.51 |
14-May-04/2:06 PM |
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did you mean "hart" is in a male [red] deer?
quite nice, though maybe a few too many "is"s and "was"s
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wilco 24.176.102.131 |
14-May-04/3:04 PM |
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Ahhh, tequila...that which makes me feel like hell. Very nice.
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wilco 24.176.102.131 |
14-May-04/3:10 PM |
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You need to write something really crappy so I can stop giving you nines and tens (it's getting rather old).
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| Re: untitled: dedicated to my soldier/husband by SweetJuliet10 |
Sasha 69.138.236.63 |
14-May-04/3:32 PM |
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Now now it wasn't nice of you to delete my comment like that. I mean, I'd just re-post it, but I can't because I don't remember: partly beccause your poem had a mental black-out effect similar to the pressure of a steel baseball bat when applied to the skull of a living person. O well.
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| Re: Lips no longer innocent by tre |
Jeremi B. Handrinos 24.130.62.63 |
14-May-04/7:03 PM |
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I read the first line. Then vomited upon and ate my own penis with a draught of dark warm ale.
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INTRANSIT 205.188.116.68 |
14-May-04/7:49 PM |
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This has holes that I can't seem to get across. sorry.
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| Re: In the Land of Bob by Bobjim |
INTRANSIT 205.188.116.68 |
14-May-04/7:56 PM |
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Congratulations. You went for poetry, and got humor. I went for humor, and wound up glancing off an udder into the far reaches of the galaxy. Cows happen.
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INTRANSIT 205.188.116.68 |
14-May-04/8:02 PM |
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Why you little.....
Making me scroll all the way down here just to read the comments! No you do not get on the worst list with this!!!
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cuddlytiger17 64.80.244.219 |
14-May-04/8:52 PM |
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so disappointing but true...Beautifully written...~10~
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| Re: Bashing through the woods by INTRANSIT |
New Life Drug 69.106.248.241 |
15-May-04/12:16 AM |
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| Re: The Plea of the Beneathednessified (New poetry scheme!) by Enkidu |
New Life Drug 69.106.248.241 |
15-May-04/12:18 AM |
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i cant read this i just cant
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| Re: Fear by Phalkon |
New Life Drug 69.106.248.241 |
15-May-04/12:19 AM |
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what happens next???? suspense is fun
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| Re: this bitter heart by New Life Drug |
titan69 213.48.74.43 |
15-May-04/12:43 AM |
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| Re: Gravity Rides by Jealousy |
titan69 213.48.74.43 |
15-May-04/12:48 AM |
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A very mooving poem Out of all the trash on PR
this is true feeling pome.good work
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francis nor capule 203.131.149.245 |
15-May-04/4:38 AM |
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mmmm, prob start looking for someone else... ei , just my opinion :P
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