| Re: The Ballad of Fraser Allonby Q.C., Barrister-At-Law by wFraser Allonby Q.C.w |
Shuushin 147.154.235.51 |
14-May-04/8:46 AM |
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Hello Fraser! Welcome to Poemranker! Thanks for posting such a great poem! A/S/L?
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| Re: The Ballad of Fraser Allonby Q.C., Barrister-At-Law by wFraser Allonby Q.C.w |
fair12 66.84.225.2 |
14-May-04/9:49 AM |
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that was great! thoroughly enjoyable.. I dub thee with a 9
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| Re: The Plea of the Beneathednessified (New poetry scheme!) by Enkidu |
Stephen Robins 195.92.198.71 |
14-May-04/9:58 AM |
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"Speak now as a man no dog or angel" may benefit from punctuation.
Aside from that this poem is a blender full of turds.
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Shuushin 147.154.235.51 |
14-May-04/10:24 AM |
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Okay. I'm bored with you now.
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| Re: Diane Keaton's Tits by JoyLuck |
Bobjim 81.131.223.2 |
14-May-04/10:42 AM |
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Love it, even though any meaning is lost on me. Have a 10.
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| Re: Bashing through the woods by INTRANSIT |
INTRANSIT 152.163.252.165 |
14-May-04/10:53 AM |
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This is profiling. And profiling is wrong.
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| Re: Waves (2) by Rilke4ClosetLesbians |
Bobjim 81.131.223.2 |
14-May-04/11:22 AM |
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Wow. Almost deep and meaningful. But not quite. 7
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| Re: Naughty Word Game by kthay |
Bobjim 81.131.223.2 |
14-May-04/11:24 AM |
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Oh my God. You said bum. You're a bad person and you're going to hell for that.
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| Re: In the Land of Bob by Bobjim |
sliver 63.190.65.44 |
14-May-04/11:37 AM |
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Where's Saturday and Sunday?
lost in the mind of Bob?
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| Re: The Ballad of Fraser Allonby Q.C., Barrister-At-Law by wFraser Allonby Q.C.w |
sliver 63.190.65.44 |
14-May-04/11:39 AM |
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I actually liked reading this one, Somebody shoot me!
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| Re: Bashing through the woods by INTRANSIT |
sliver 63.190.65.44 |
14-May-04/11:41 AM |
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What about the gay snakes? you left out the gay snakes!
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| Re: The Plea of the Beneathednessified (New poetry scheme!) by Enkidu |
Sasha 69.138.236.63 |
14-May-04/11:53 AM |
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beneathednessified makes me think of a cross between George Bush on a saturday night after seven beers, and e.e. cummings on a very bad day
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| Re: All Square by Enkidu |
Sasha 69.138.236.63 |
14-May-04/11:57 AM |
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What in the name of......
I suppose this fits into the category of bad ascii art. I'm not sure though.
No matter how I read this, sideways, diagonally, top to bottom, bottom to top, circularly, or after after a few shots of smirnov, this still doesen't make much more sense than the pimple on my bum.
Maybe a few BableFish iterations will improve it.
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| Re: Tasha:dedicated to my dear friend by SweetJuliet10 |
Sasha 69.138.236.63 |
14-May-04/11:48 AM |
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How touching. It makes me want to cry tears of suffocation at the rhyme heart/apart. Then I'll die.
one day we will meet again best friends me and you would be better off with two commas as you can see lack of punctuation makes one sound either like a non-anglophone frenchman reading the King James Bible or like a a somnambulant George Bush.
Here's a -4- to take the pain away
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| Re: In the Land of Bob by Bobjim |
large_geese 217.44.102.122 |
14-May-04/11:59 AM |
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I'm not sure where from but the word plagiarism rings a bell; for something which is more serious than a made up poem.
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| Re: death makes me vain! by SweetJuliet10 |
Sasha 69.138.236.63 |
14-May-04/12:01 PM |
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Painful and hell only rhyme when Dante is turning over in his grave to the tune of Robert Pinsky's consonantal clip-clop crap.
Now, about the poem. Wait, it's not a poem.
If I have to read the words
life and knife just one more time
Then I'll go into convulsions
More than at this very rhyme
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
titan69 62.31.24.124 |
14-May-04/12:41 PM |
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Hello this is captain kerk fuck off?
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Shuushin 147.154.235.51 |
14-May-04/12:43 PM |
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I had such high hopes....
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Sasha 69.138.236.63 |
14-May-04/12:46 PM |
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Do you have a speech problem? Did you suffer a stroke in early childhood while watching Star Trek the next Generation that permanantly damaged the left half of your brain?
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| Re: Bashing through the woods by INTRANSIT |
Shuushin 147.154.235.51 |
14-May-04/12:53 PM |
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This went completely over my head.
Here's a nine because I could never picture a snake with breasts, no matter how hard I tried - until now. Thank you.
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