| Re: Insomnia by wilco |
daveslady 140.211.124.224 |
10-May-04/8:37 PM |
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| Re: selfhood, through extrospection by nentwined |
sliver 65.178.192.168 |
10-May-04/8:43 PM |
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| Re: selfhood, through extrospection by nentwined |
<~> 69.0.38.136 |
10-May-04/8:00 PM |
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nice. now it all comes clear.
alles ist klar.
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| Re: Fire of Life by Katzclear |
sliver 65.178.192.168 |
10-May-04/8:27 PM |
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Yes, It's always worth it. Been awhile since I've been here, how ya doin?
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
wilco 24.176.102.131 |
10-May-04/6:48 PM |
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Sounds like you need a band-aid or 3
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| Re: In the berth by INTRANSIT |
Shuushin 207.5.211.177 |
10-May-04/6:59 PM |
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For a minute - I was in my own cab. good un.
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| Re: Obituary for the Moon by wilco |
Shuushin 207.5.211.177 |
10-May-04/6:59 PM |
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That would work. yep, yes it would.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
Shuushin 207.5.211.177 |
10-May-04/7:03 PM |
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I'd like to see a different word than warriors - but the piece in its entirety, it is quite poignant nonetheless.
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| Re: Insomnia by wilco |
wilco 24.176.102.131 |
10-May-04/7:07 PM |
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I wrote this my freshman year of college and ran across it tonight. Since I'm 1/2 drunk and don't much feel like writing, I decided to post it. Please have mercy, as it is what it is. ;o)
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| Re: Its raining by caitydee |
Shuushin 207.5.211.177 |
10-May-04/7:09 PM |
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"The rain storms" delete "rain"; not too shabby. Stays I think to the right side of pimple - but only barely.
What else u got? Fire it up.
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| Re: selfhood, through extrospection by nentwined |
wilco 24.176.102.131 |
10-May-04/7:28 PM |
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-8- Because introspection is so very overrated.
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| Re: Its raining by caitydee |
wilco 24.176.102.131 |
10-May-04/7:39 PM |
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Not enough cursing to really be a pimple....
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| Re: After the ice season ~ shamelessly lewd revision by zodiac |
wilco 24.176.102.131 |
10-May-04/7:52 PM |
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I'm not really seeing anything "shamelessly lewd" here, but it's pretty good.
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| Re: Lover by daveslady |
daveslady 140.211.124.224 |
10-May-04/8:44 PM |
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Zodiac, thanks for the comments. I wrote this a while ago while Dave and I were doing really well and I missed him vey much. Since then...well, everything has changed. Might need to write a new poem to explain it all. Anyway, thanks for the thoughts and believe me Ive thought it over a bunch.
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| Re: As Catullus Said (Updated and Revised) by Sasha |
sliver 65.178.192.168 |
10-May-04/8:51 PM |
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| Re: Bracelets In A Box by cuddlytiger17 |
sliver 65.178.192.168 |
10-May-04/8:56 PM |
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TEEN? That's been a fanta------- O.K. I actually like this, I guess 28 years hasn't been enough growing up for me. But expand n these feelings, It says what you mean, now just find more ways to say it. By the way, how old is your friend Sasha? I'm not afraid to travel!
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| Re: Leading To Fatality by cuddlytiger17 |
sliver 65.178.192.168 |
10-May-04/9:00 PM |
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Good words,Give it a few years, you might find a good man and a real talent for writing.
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| Re: Highschool in My Head by MacFrantic |
NoSage 65.178.192.168 |
10-May-04/9:19 PM |
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Oh yes, I'm sure you'll go far. Don't drop the glasses.
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| Re: Its raining by caitydee |
caitydee 205.188.116.68 |
10-May-04/9:30 PM |
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sorry Silver-I accidentally erased your comment-( meant to reply questioning it-you can put it back up if you would like!
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| Re: After the ice season ~ shamelessly lewd revision by zodiac |
<{Baba^Yaga}> 24.130.62.63 |
10-May-04/11:21 PM |
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