Re: Barometric pressure & true love (The prince of storms) by Jeremi B. Handrinos	edpeterson 68.79.14.47	13-Apr-04/7:43 AM
Jeremi B. Handrinos? LOL.
Re: Severed Arm by jessicazee	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 217.44.158.156	13-Apr-04/7:50 AM
I'd like to see a greater emphasis on the apron and less about your emotions.
Re: new amsterdam by ThePariahDog	some deleted user 198.26.119.85	13-Apr-04/8:10 AM
I absolutely love this poem. I applaud the synical tone of its anti-consumeristic message, although it does sound a bit like a Earth Liberation Front homepage message. Nevertheless, kudos.
regarding some deleted poem...	some deleted user 68.66.196.168	13-Apr-04/8:31 AM
I don't know who "you" is, can just guess. Otherwise good images.
Re: in perspective by That One	some deleted user 68.66.196.168	13-Apr-04/8:34 AM
A bit disjointed and unfocused it seems. Could do without the last line.
Re: ex by TheLegacy	edpeterson 68.79.14.47	13-Apr-04/9:02 AM
pretty good write, but not a haiku. It seems like it might be a hook for a longer poem.
regarding some deleted poem...	Caducus 195.92.168.170	13-Apr-04/9:41 AM
Love the simplicity of slate gray sky.
Re: Help Me Water The Garden by Blindpoetry	Blindpoetry 68.106.171.15	13-Apr-04/11:58 AM
a bit weird looking, eh? The third stanza is supposed to have four lines
regarding some deleted poem...	some deleted user 64.173.77.254	13-Apr-04/12:30 PM
This is better. A bit sing-songy, I'd call it lyric, but definitely better.
regarding some deleted poem...	some deleted user 64.173.77.254	13-Apr-04/12:37 PM
The last line falls a bit contrdictory. The idea "to impress anyone" leads to disappointment or worse - to success. "Wasting the world's time" Hmmmmm - sounds like fun, think I'll try it.
Re: hoping by francis nor capule	some deleted user 64.173.77.254	13-Apr-04/12:41 PM
s1 - s3 flow pretty well. I think that when you start a pattern like this, you commit yourself to follow it through to the end. When you change patterns midway through, it sends a reader wandering.
Re: Somewhere In Islam by Caducus	some deleted user 64.173.77.254	13-Apr-04/12:47 PM
son's -> sons writher -> wither in to -> into minaret's -> minarets urn's -> urns Some good images here!
regarding some deleted poem...	wilco 24.176.102.131	13-Apr-04/1:30 PM
Definitely one of your best.
regarding some deleted poem...	jessicazee 64.12.116.140	13-Apr-04/1:50 PM
Love the last two lines.
regarding some deleted poem...	zodiac 152.18.33.186	13-Apr-04/2:03 PM
No offense, hypatia and Shuushin, but I can't help noticing that the most-commented-on-poems of the day are about (what a surprise) ROSES and SNOWFALL. I mean, I agree that this is one of your best posts, but it's about ROSES!! ROOOOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHSESSSSSS!!!!
regarding some deleted poem...	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 81.86.113.159	13-Apr-04/3:16 PM
But what about the trousers? For the love of God, what happened to the trousers?!
regarding some deleted poem...	some deleted user 68.66.196.168	13-Apr-04/3:31 PM
Okay, it's about MMMMUUURRRRRDDDEEEEERRRRRR!!! But only because you told me as a comment to my "A Rose." And now I know who "you" is, and I'm afraid. Strange how one word from the author changes the entire mood.
Re: sum of squares by nentwined	some deleted user 68.66.196.168	13-Apr-04/3:37 PM
I think the idea of Least Squares would work here, minimizing the sum of squared differences from something and thereby deriving a best-fit curve. This seems to ramble some, a bit repititious, but still it's a good take on the tug-of-war.
Re: Field Trip by wilco	some deleted user 68.66.196.168	13-Apr-04/3:44 PM
This poem is a little perplexing, but you're not a dunce, as some say, and your poemes are not bulging johnnies of lost hope. A field trip to the heavens!
Re: Diary entry (edit) by richa	Shuushin 207.5.211.177	13-Apr-04/6:05 PM
Well, I'm still a little miffed that you didn't come to my desperate aid on "The People" - but I forgive you. hefty wood pigeon... is this a type of pigeon, or are you telling me the pigeon is hefty and made of wood? I sincerely thought the latter until I started trying to help you come up with a way to say it was hefty without saying "hefty". And now I feel dumb. Is the last stanza part of a question? maple it is, maple it isn't...