| Re: Homecoming by somemorepoetry |
zodiac 67.240.155.141 |
26-Feb-04/1:47 PM |
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Good except for "move on to".
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| Re: The Nude by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
AskittlesK 69.3.221.114 |
26-Feb-04/1:58 PM |
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question... why did u put There's already a shit Type 0 Negative song called this. I suggest you cram a piano into your mouth and then punch a beehive.
on one of my poems... i wrote this poem myself.. i looked it up and yes there is a song called Don't Wanna Be Me but its not the same song.. not even close.. i just thought i'd tell you this...
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
?-Dave_Mysterious-? 163.1.235.142 |
26-Feb-04/6:11 PM |
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It is not yet spring. Please resubmit this poem on 21st March.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
?-Dave_Mysterious-? 163.1.235.142 |
26-Feb-04/6:27 PM |
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What did you give up? Poety?
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| Re: Opposites by BrandonW |
?-Dave_Mysterious-? 163.1.235.142 |
26-Feb-04/6:28 PM |
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Then riddle me this, oh wise one:
What is the opposite of mediocre?
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
smlink84 68.98.150.99 |
26-Feb-04/8:30 PM |
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yeah, you are indeed in need of deliverence.
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| Re: Homecoming by somemorepoetry |
smlink84 68.98.150.99 |
26-Feb-04/8:33 PM |
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I like the illustrations but the technique could use work
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
smlink84 68.98.150.99 |
26-Feb-04/8:35 PM |
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Jesus Christ is the only way my friend. He loves me and he loves you too.
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| Re: Fingerless Gloves by ?-Dave_Mysterious-? |
smlink84 68.98.150.99 |
26-Feb-04/8:38 PM |
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the hell are you talking about....your scrotum?
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| Re: Quest! by ?-Dave_Mysterious-? |
smlink84 68.98.150.99 |
26-Feb-04/8:42 PM |
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
smlink84 68.98.150.99 |
26-Feb-04/8:44 PM |
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hey bro, ever heard of grace? God gives Grace to the humble...you cannot become a better man no matter what you do....only God can do that for you. Just goto him and confess all your weaknesses and ask for his glory and love....thats all you need to do
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| Re: Girlz by liljsmith87 |
smlink84 68.98.150.99 |
26-Feb-04/9:01 PM |
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if I beat myself into a delusional state, would I then understand why you wrote this and whatyou expected?
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| Re: Oh No! by foothangingoutofass |
smlink84 68.98.150.99 |
26-Feb-04/9:03 PM |
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yeah...thats great....BALEATED!!!!!!!!!! 0
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| Re: Whore Of Nazareth by Mona Lisa |
smlink84 68.98.150.99 |
26-Feb-04/9:05 PM |
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interesting....there is hope
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| Re: Dream of a Vanilla Sky by smlink84 |
zodiac 67.240.155.126 |
27-Feb-04/4:12 AM |
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Vanilla Sky is the absolute worst movie ever. I have seen films that were trying to be bad which aren't as bad. Referencing that movie in a pretentious wannabe serious poem is, I'm afraid, equivalent to enfolding a moldy piece of stale jerky in a fresh steaming turd.
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| Re: Dream of a Vanilla Sky by smlink84 |
Shuushin 207.5.211.177 |
27-Feb-04/4:24 AM |
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Quick note - you don't need to put the title in the body as well.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
leonxic 80.205.204.109 |
27-Feb-04/6:41 AM |
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I'm beginning to like the idea of "I love you, so I'll kill you." It reminds me of a few songs by My Chemical Romance. You get an 8.
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| Re: Red by AskittlesK |
leonxic 80.205.204.109 |
27-Feb-04/6:48 AM |
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You are a dumbass... simply a dumbass. You're most likely catholic as well.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
sliver 63.190.81.175 |
27-Feb-04/6:52 AM |
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Someday, if you practise reeeally hard, you might beat me on a regular basis. (But only if I'm drunk)
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
sliver 63.190.81.175 |
27-Feb-04/6:53 AM |
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You'd probably chuckle if you heard my resolutions. Just wish me luck.
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