| Re: Good King Brownceslas by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
zodiac 152.30.11.217 |
25-Feb-04/10:53 AM |
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The best rhyming on this site ever! Horizon/wisened, hardened/pardened (sic), tincture/sphincter, sure/ordure - gems all. And a worthy lesson to CLS and her ilk, if they weren't too stupid to recognise it.
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| Re: Wartner by unouluvme |
zodiac 152.30.11.176 |
25-Feb-04/11:32 AM |
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Lenore 64.252.102.134 |
25-Feb-04/12:29 PM |
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Time, my good friend, will all that's needful give.
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| Re: Wartner by unouluvme |
unouluvme 66.167.220.126 |
25-Feb-04/2:44 PM |
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i didnt really expect anuone to read/care about this... it was one of my "God, i am so bored right now, hummm...well, lets see what cool sites are on the internet..." poems. Haha. oh well...thanks for the comments!
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| Re: Wartner by unouluvme |
zodiac 152.30.44.208 |
25-Feb-04/6:10 PM |
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Crystal Lane Swift/lydia evelyn has posted 152 poems on this site. Only horus8 and INTRANSIT have posted more. Does anyone else find this REALLY UNSETTLING??!!?!?! I mean, WHAT THE HELL FOLKS???!??!?!?
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Shuushin 207.5.211.177 |
25-Feb-04/8:10 PM |
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Quite nice (espec. S4) till the last. then I got confuz-ed.
Settle for a nine?
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| Re: Good King Brownceslas by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
RGallet 68.9.128.195 |
25-Feb-04/9:20 PM |
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I got 99 problems but a bitch ain't one.
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| Re: Good King Brownceslas by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
Stephen Robins 213.146.148.199 |
26-Feb-04/3:03 AM |
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| Re: I don't wanna be me by AskittlesK |
Stephen Robins 213.146.148.199 |
26-Feb-04/3:10 AM |
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Have you thought of setting this to music and having Rick Walla sing it?
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| Re: I don't wanna be me by AskittlesK |
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 131.111.212.215 |
26-Feb-04/4:56 AM |
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There's already a shit Type 0 Negative song called this. I suggest you cram a piano into your mouth and then punch a beehive.
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-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 131.111.212.215 |
26-Feb-04/5:13 AM |
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| Re: Choices in the Road by Pervy Elf |
zodiac 67.240.211.159 |
26-Feb-04/5:38 AM |
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I'd like to recommend the following revision:
Choices in the Road (Free verse) by Pervy Elf
Two roads diverged in a yellow wood,
And sorry I could not travel both
And be one traveler long I stood
Scratching my cock (which has a hood)
In its tangle of pubic undergrowth.
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| Re: Choices in the Road by Pervy Elf |
richa 81.178.212.40 |
26-Feb-04/7:49 AM |
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To express this sentiment should only take two sentences max.
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| Re: Homecoming by somemorepoetry |
richa 81.178.212.40 |
26-Feb-04/7:50 AM |
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| Re: Red by AskittlesK |
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 163.1.146.114 |
26-Feb-04/8:45 AM |
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Beautiful... simply beautiful.
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| Re: Red by AskittlesK |
richa 81.178.199.246 |
26-Feb-04/9:55 AM |
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In hell you will be made to face yourself. How you have made light of self-mutilation.
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| Re: Heather by andrewjthomas |
richa 81.178.199.246 |
26-Feb-04/10:02 AM |
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Many many stereotypes hold this back. Well written.
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zodiac 67.240.192.97 |
26-Feb-04/12:55 PM |
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Periods are not standard endings for stanzas. Note "seduced. By harlot wearing garments red..." Are you sure you didn't mean a comma or something? And also, incidentally, some kind of article before "harlot"?
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| Re: Opposites by BrandonW |
zodiac 67.240.192.97 |
26-Feb-04/1:01 PM |
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You had me until "this thing I call my life". Ugh. And congratulations on your use of the word copacetic. It's the fashizzle.
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| Re: beef flavored ramen by ThePariahDog |
zodiac 67.240.192.97 |
26-Feb-04/1:03 PM |
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A truer sex poem was never written. "endless noodle sucked through an indifferent orifice" -10-
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