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nothingtoanyone 65.179.137.170 |
24-Feb-04/10:12 PM |
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yeah well your not my english teacher so I ll just let what you have to say roll on off!!!
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nothingtoanyone 65.179.137.170 |
24-Feb-04/10:34 PM |
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LoL I ll read what you have to say and try to learn from it but im a slow learner so....yeah anyways
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| Re: Jonquils, daffydils by fevriere |
Bachus 24.130.214.180 |
24-Feb-04/12:37 PM |
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Yeah, I remember Paris in October too, an overated hump of vibrating asshats on a 'delicate' spin cycle.
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Bachus 24.130.214.180 |
24-Feb-04/12:42 PM |
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Christ, I've seen absorbent papertowels before but never an absorbent Michelle Pfiefer washing the carpet with her carpet.
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| Re: Whore Of Nazareth by Mona Lisa |
zodiac 152.30.60.200 |
24-Feb-04/1:46 PM |
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"And my wombs not yellowed by life," - as good a place as any for:
Bow'ls.
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| Re: Whore Of Nazareth by Mona Lisa |
richa 81.178.228.199 |
24-Feb-04/2:08 PM |
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Seen a lot of this before, may have been you or a caducus poem.
The first line is pretty ace though.
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| Re: Glass Flowers by Bachus |
richa 81.178.228.199 |
24-Feb-04/2:11 PM |
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Not sure I understand convicted in the first line. Or the question mark.
Reads well enough though.
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| Re: Damn Georgia Power by BrandonW |
richa 81.178.228.199 |
24-Feb-04/2:13 PM |
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can nothing but a brownout stop this flowing?
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richa 81.178.228.199 |
24-Feb-04/2:15 PM |
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Like the anthropomorphism going on here, and the turn of phrase.
'the roosters made ready'
'ocean... took inventory'
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| Re: the wind's last crescendo by fair12 |
richa 81.178.228.199 |
24-Feb-04/2:19 PM |
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Has a nice poetic feel, which is not always such a bad thing.
Pleasant, and has a finished feel to it.
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| Re: A Natural Witch by Lenore |
richa 81.178.228.199 |
24-Feb-04/2:21 PM |
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Personally I would prefer the witch to be a character.
Then you can bring out these features in a more scholarly and less serially way.
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| Re: Everyone's choosing sides by zodiac |
richa 81.178.228.199 |
24-Feb-04/2:25 PM |
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A nice rush-like quality to this. And a good combination of image and narrative.
Not sure about sharp smelling as memory. Do you really mean that memory is sharp smelling?
Also wet leaves do not really burn.
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| Re: Quest! by ?-Dave_Mysterious-? |
richa 81.178.228.199 |
24-Feb-04/2:27 PM |
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If you are not a child then you are an idiot -8-
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-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 194.222.223.239 |
24-Feb-04/4:06 PM |
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Why do you continue to smear these offerings all over poemeranker like a crusted tramp leaving brownly marks upon a scrambled egg?
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| Re: Whore Of Nazareth by Mona Lisa |
zodiac 152.18.33.197 |
24-Feb-04/6:17 PM |
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rockmage's last login: Tuesday, 17-Feb-04/7:08 PM.
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nothingtoanyone 63.183.233.221 |
24-Feb-04/7:22 PM |
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Opps it's spost to be insents.
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| Re: fade in by inka |
DarkThirteens 24.18.137.238 |
24-Feb-04/8:02 PM |
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This is exelent! Definately work you should be proud of.
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| Re: Amateur excavators by darkshark |
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 131.111.212.215 |
25-Feb-04/6:15 AM |
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| Re: Good King Brownceslas by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 163.1.146.114 |
25-Feb-04/9:49 AM |
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| Re: Good King Brownceslas by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
Shuushin 147.154.235.52 |
25-Feb-04/10:05 AM |
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Thank you for including the link to the tune - I was struggling to amermer it.
crap - the link is too busy; will try later.
Christmas is forever improved.
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