regarding some deleted poem...	zodiac 67.240.211.16	6-Feb-04/7:09 PM
This may be satire. But it's also incomprehensible. What's buried deep at the foot of the gate?
regarding some deleted poem...	Sam 65.37.95.81	6-Feb-04/7:11 PM
very true...parents nowadays don't spend much time with their children so they acted like monkeys (LOL) and no pill can ever cure this other than the time a parent could spend climbing up the tree with them, hey it could be fun after all (LOL). All in all, the poem is really great satirically true.
Re: Top of the World by Britpop	slapmeonthepatio 68.9.128.195	6-Feb-04/7:39 PM
Work on rythm.
Re: King of the Road by Britpop	slapmeonthepatio 68.9.128.195	6-Feb-04/7:40 PM
DIDACTIC
Re: pledging allegiance by moonUnit	slapmeonthepatio 68.9.128.195	6-Feb-04/7:40 PM
profound. And by profound I mean dull. DULL DULL DULL.
Re: Caged World by deep-as-a-puddle	slapmeonthepatio 68.9.128.195	6-Feb-04/7:40 PM
oh shut up hippy
Re: fire by bxjay170	slapmeonthepatio 68.9.128.195	6-Feb-04/7:40 PM
awesome
regarding some deleted poem...	Blindpoetry 68.106.171.15	6-Feb-04/8:00 PM
"Do you jerk, jerk Jerk jerk jerk it, Before or after here?" well... I've never really seen one word repeated 5 times in a row and in the same stanza. Kinda odd, dontcha think?
regarding some deleted poem...	tadpole 63.211.241.144	6-Feb-04/8:54 PM
I like all of it except the last 2 lines. It sounds kind of Dr. Suessish to me. . .I like Dr. Suess.
regarding some deleted poem...	tadpole 63.211.241.144	6-Feb-04/9:01 PM
Hey, definitely a good topic. . .I especially like the title
Re: Ducks With AIDs (a feeble attempt of something different) by Blindpoetry	Billy Biff-Chin 213.122.196.99	7-Feb-04/1:58 AM
Very good. -8- Sorry about plagiarising your other poems. I was just messing around to piss you off. This is a real improvement on your other poems. I agree with the other poets here that it's better to write about new, unexpected things than about stale and tired old subjects. It's better to write about something that will make everyone sit up and take notice. The idea of licking an ashtray "to get satisfaction" is surprising and interesting. The next lesson: learn to think beyond the obvious. I suggest you try to describe things in astonishingly accurate but unexpected ways. But don't take these poems to school. Teachers won't like you writing about ducks with AIDS. That's because teachers are narrow-minded and unimaginative fools with little aptitude for appreciating originality. That's a broad generalisation, but I remember how rubbish school can be.
regarding some deleted poem...	Billy Biff-Chin 213.122.196.99	7-Feb-04/2:02 AM
Glad to see you back. You really are a very funny man. In my experience, however, masturbation and poemeranker are unconnected. But I have noticed a close connection between jerking off and my DVD of Teenage Christian Virgins Take It Up The Dirthole 32 (starring Crystal Lane Swift).
regarding some deleted poem...	Billy Biff-Chin 213.122.196.99	7-Feb-04/2:03 AM
Excellent. By the way, are you aware of the radical changes introduced in your absence (such as hyperlinked IPs)?
regarding some deleted poem...	Billy Biff-Chin 213.122.196.99	7-Feb-04/2:04 AM
This is a real triumph. I nominate this my poem of the year. And it's only February.
regarding some deleted poem...	Billy Biff-Chin 213.122.196.99	7-Feb-04/2:06 AM
You're only warming up here, I can tell. Delete this poem now. -10-
regarding some deleted poem...	Goad 217.226.20.76	7-Feb-04/3:32 AM
"there is no skill" lol. Keep telling yourself that. You probably rarely make 4 balls in a row, but in tournaments good players routinely run 4 games in a row. Put you on a snooker table and you probably only make 1 out of 4 shots. But in most world tournaments these days someone posts a perfect game -- that's 36 shots in a row. In what other sport is there such a huge magnitude of difference in results obtained by the average dork & a professional? Pool's more about skill than any other sport going.
regarding some deleted poem...	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 131.111.212.215	7-Feb-04/3:51 AM
b4
regarding some deleted poem...	Shuushin 207.5.211.177	7-Feb-04/5:05 AM
Most gays are only faking it to get attention - same with straight people. This is especially true on poemranker, and specifically true in settle's case.
regarding some deleted poem...	Shuushin 207.5.211.177	7-Feb-04/5:14 AM
was the cold-cut bologna by any chance? Your love of mathematics is obvious. cool title.
regarding some deleted poem...	Shuushin 207.5.211.177	7-Feb-04/5:21 AM
Hey, its a cute ditty; more craft than art - and occasionally that's not a terrible thing. high marks for accessibility - poetry for the wheelchaired masses (and/or harnessed, as the case may be). Suggestion: change "for fun" to "diversion" - it rhymes a bit better with conclusion. You may want to stick a descriptor in there, "happy", or "playful"; something like that. You could also change the title to "pool and poetry"...