Re: Ducks With AIDs (a feeble attempt of something different) by Blindpoetry	Blindpoetry 68.106.171.15	6-Feb-04/3:27 PM
oops I over-looked a typo. "says" in the 28 days later part is really "days" sorry.
Re: A Panglossian Farmer by richa	Shuushin 207.5.211.177	5-Feb-04/9:24 PM
paints an interesting picture; fresh. walls? plural? why? I like the "week in plaster" but it pulls me from a simpler time; smacks of technology - maybe a splint?
Re: Soft Beak; Hard lotion by Bachus	A. Nomaly 66.52.12.40	5-Feb-04/9:35 PM
monumental poem. this is why i miss u. when r u coming back to the city of angels? I am @ the same address. pls come visit
Re: The City (New Jerusaem) by blkarak	<{Baba^Yaga}> 24.126.116.54	5-Feb-04/11:34 PM
It might work if you would have spelled fucking Jerusalem right.
Re: rather not high jump every 20 minutes, well maybe o.k. by A. Nomaly	<{Baba^Yaga}> 24.126.116.54	5-Feb-04/11:37 PM
I'm listening to billy idol and curling my lip in la currently
Re: Gardener by lastobelus	richa 81.178.228.189	5-Feb-04/11:37 PM
Verse 2 is very sweet, could be a poem in itself that image.
Re: James Taylor by Tom Colebrooke	deano 212.219.142.161	6-Feb-04/3:12 AM
absolutely brilliant, the symantic fields used just finish it off perfectly
regarding some deleted poem...	zodiac 67.240.192.183	6-Feb-04/7:19 AM
Haikus are easy to write and hard to judge. Are you a canny politician or just a bad writer? That said, the Chinatown grammar kind of pleases me, though I would change the title (since "Remembering _Girl's name_" is never going to go off well anywhere,) and then write about 20 more lines of this.
Re: rather not high jump every 20 minutes, well maybe o.k. by A. Nomaly	zodiac 67.240.192.183	6-Feb-04/7:22 AM
Were you interrupted while writing this (prhaps by one of the eponymous high-jumps)? What you have is rather good in a fitter-happier sort of way, but it breaks off really, really abruptly and unsatisfyingly. So we dont necessarily read poetry to be satisfied, you say. Buncombe, I say. -8-
regarding some deleted poem...	Goad 213.61.217.3	6-Feb-04/8:46 AM
When did they change the elixirs of dualism from green to red? Was Dubya responsible for that? Conservatives have it so easy -- only two bottles to choose between at each world-changing nexus.
regarding some deleted poem...	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 163.1.146.87	6-Feb-04/9:01 AM
YOU BULGING CACK OF IGNORANCE. HOW DARE YOU SMEAR HIS MASTER'S JODHPURS WITH AN ANONYMOUS ZERO? I WILL BE REPORTING THIS TO THE SYSTEM ADMINISTRATOR POSTE-HASTE!!!!1 Thanks -10-
regarding some deleted poem...	xxx 68.165.172.185	6-Feb-04/9:13 AM
Actually at first glance I thought, "Naw. This is a leg puller." Then I read again. And again. While my leg feels much longer, I can't dismiss the feeling that this is good.
Re: Go Figure by MacFrantic	zodiac 152.30.201.22	6-Feb-04/9:19 AM
You Shouldn't Oughtn't Mightn't Try Because you Can't. So don't. Cant. -0-
Re: Lonely Tears by broken_wing11	SmittenKitten 65.206.19.71	6-Feb-04/1:35 PM
great poem!
Re: "In the Air" by SmittenKitten	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 131.111.212.215	6-Feb-04/5:01 PM
Did you get your username from an episode of Ant & Dec's "Wonky Donkey"?
Re: Swiftly by darkshark	Shuushin 207.5.211.177	6-Feb-04/5:08 PM
sounds too cold to cross with bare feet... I don't think the first stanza is really needed, certainly not the first line (if not, then u could change "water" to "brook") nor is "out of the water" the last "And" could better be "Then"
regarding some deleted poem...	WithoutLife 172.169.135.41	6-Feb-04/5:09 PM
I really like this one. I like sleep a lot ^^;; so it works great for me. I like the imagery!
regarding some deleted poem...	WithoutLife 172.169.135.41	6-Feb-04/5:15 PM
reminds me of the poems in the Where the Sidewalk Ends books. Why do you envy my poem writting when you are better, missy?
regarding some deleted poem...	xxx 68.165.172.185	6-Feb-04/6:52 PM
rather poorly done
Re: Swiftly by darkshark	Sam 65.37.95.81	6-Feb-04/6:53 PM
Nicely done!