Re: Creep into my heart by mozac	some deleted user 208.28.223.74	29-Jan-04/9:55 AM
i think this poem is pretty....
Re: Tomorrow by sykes	Sam 203.160.161.10	29-Jan-04/1:27 AM
This is good one hell of a drama on a Christmas eve but nevertheless poignant.
Re: His Master's Jodhpurs by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	Stephen Robins 213.146.148.199	29-Jan-04/3:09 AM
dead good. matthew & James do you remeber a chap called david wilson from High Wycombe? I know him and he has just dumped my friend I want to spank the living Greg Dyke out of him.
Re: The Hermit by sykes	lastobelus 80.132.178.161	29-Jan-04/4:27 AM
Dieser hier ist kein Übermensch, sondern ein Überkitsch.
Re: A strange Wonder by mozac	some deleted user 208.28.223.74	29-Jan-04/9:57 AM
i can imagine everything as i read it...
Re: raven hath spoken (testing....) by crwncka1	zodiac 67.240.155.82	29-Jan-04/4:28 AM
Dear god... You might consider changing your title to "8 Commas, a Dash, an Exclamation Mark, and 839 Words of Meaningless Rambling Drivel, Topped By a Pretentious Use of 'Hath'." Do you do this all the time?!? My favorite part is "a true vision of knowing found looking deep within to find the surface hiding your real nature" which is, after all, as good an instance as any of something being found by finding.
Re: The Hermit by sykes	zodiac 67.240.211.164	29-Jan-04/5:52 AM
Ah, the famous 'street'/'speak' half-rhyme, finished up with the stalwart 'home' and 'alone'! Go on, now, and tell yourself (and us) that we can't write half this well. We don't mind.
regarding some deleted poem...	Stephen Robins 213.146.148.199	29-Jan-04/6:00 AM
My most sophisticated rythm yet.
regarding some deleted poem...	wFraser Allonby Q.C.w 195.157.153.253	29-Jan-04/6:49 AM
LOLTTM!!!!!!11111111111 I love the last one best of all. Have you listened to the Wesley Willis CD yet?
Re: A Guilty Bride's Demise by eldorado	some deleted user 208.28.223.46	29-Jan-04/7:05 AM
i could imagine everything as i read it
Re: Cold Set by feathers68	some deleted user 208.28.223.46	29-Jan-04/7:13 AM
i really like it...
Re: Cold Rain Road by middenHeap	Fear of Garbage 156.63.85.15	29-Jan-04/7:36 AM
alright. i like: hunched black bird,the pole, fragile egg body, gingerly, the jarring last line. i dislike: beginning a line with the word "but," steel cubes (a poor metaphor) and i think thats about it. interesting but ultimately could be much better if you just wrote it all together like a flow and din't worry about. i might be wrong but this sounds like it was written at different times...there are these intervals..
Re: Come off with me Carly back into the city by zodiac	richa 81.178.216.97	29-Jan-04/8:31 AM
this poem really benefits from the introduction. To me the superstition, almost delusion contrasts really well with the sadness.
regarding some deleted poem...	some deleted user 208.25.247.73	29-Jan-04/8:40 AM
I belive who ever gave you a 0 should get their ass kicked...I really enjoyed this one.
regarding some deleted poem...	xxx 68.165.172.185	29-Jan-04/8:50 AM
Not up to your usual. But good none-the-less.
Re: Only in humility by mozac	some deleted user 208.28.223.74	29-Jan-04/10:05 AM
i think you should become a proffesional...i've been reading these to a friend of mine and she's fallen in love with them...she said they are some of the most well written she's seen yet on poemranker...i'll have to agree.
regarding some deleted poem...	richa 81.178.196.138	29-Jan-04/10:18 AM
not sure the couplets work for this poem, especially when they break between verse two and three.
Re: I don't fit in by devina	some deleted user 208.28.223.74	29-Jan-04/10:21 AM
i know that many people call this a "Teen Angst" poem or what not...i think it is good...i belive that poetry is poetry, and people shouldnt say what you should be writting or what you shouldnt...this is just my opinion but i find poems to be what ever the hell your feeling, a lot of people can relate or not to those feelings so i think you should keep pouring your heart out no matter what people say...it's YOUR poem... NOT theirs!
regarding some deleted poem...	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 163.1.146.87	29-Jan-04/10:24 AM
How delightfully topical!
Re: Come off with me Carly back into the city by zodiac	andrewjthomas 192.150.10.200	29-Jan-04/10:37 AM
excellent