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-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 163.1.146.87 |
25-Jan-04/1:37 PM |
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There has not been a more devastatingly accurate description of the sex act since Charles Dickens spent three days inside a whore writing feverishly. -10-
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Princess_Snowflake 206.166.118.210 |
25-Jan-04/12:50 PM |
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I'm giving you an A+. Wonderful!
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Princess_Snowflake 206.166.118.210 |
25-Jan-04/12:53 PM |
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zodiac 67.240.59.232 |
25-Jan-04/1:04 PM |
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Onouluvme - Votes generally don't mean a thing. Check out http://www.poemranker.com/poem-topten.jsp. Click "view voting details" on any of those poems. Note the repeated ISPs with different names. If you've written something decent, you'll hear about it in a comment, maybe.
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zodiac 67.240.192.173 |
25-Jan-04/1:43 PM |
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Not really a haiku, though. That gets my goat.
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| Re: moon rants by bluwiz |
zodiac 67.240.192.173 |
25-Jan-04/1:51 PM |
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How did this turn into such crap after pretty good opening lines? It's like you lost faith. Go back down Gumdrop Pass to about halfway through the first stanza and start again.
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| Re: Make Love to Me by drumrgirl30 |
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 131.111.212.215 |
25-Jan-04/1:55 PM |
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"I was unable to control myself. As I passed him on the gangplank, I shook my fist in his face. 'You pathetic duffer! There isn't a crew! Why don't you just admit that you're a lonely failure? Why continue with this demeaning charade?'
At my outburst, his tears changed colour and flowed the more. He flung his arms over his eyes and rushed below deck, beard dripping with the dew of misery."
'Rawhead & Bloody Bones', by Rhys H. Hughes
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zodiac 67.240.192.206 |
25-Jan-04/2:00 PM |
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Christof 217.44.71.71 |
26-Jan-04/5:52 AM |
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It would be really good to learn how to spell and punctuate properly
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| Re: bitch on the triple word score by middenHeap |
zodiac 67.240.155.218 |
25-Jan-04/3:14 PM |
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It would be even better with a bunch of seven-letter words starting with Qu or X. No, I can't think of any myself right now.
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zodiac 67.240.155.120 |
25-Jan-04/4:18 PM |
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I'd like to see you write something longer than haiku. You'll be a long time filling a book that way.
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| Re: Make Love to Me by drumrgirl30 |
penguin fiend 216.207.133.166 |
25-Jan-04/5:37 PM |
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I LOVE it, I'm only giving you a 9 cuz I wish I wrote it
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penguin fiend 216.207.133.166 |
25-Jan-04/5:41 PM |
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it's s good poem, but too much of a mainstream-teen kinda thing...you also don't don't have confidence in any of your poems, which is kinda sad
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| Re: The Grandfather Suite by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
Lenore 64.252.99.60 |
25-Jan-04/10:34 PM |
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Sometimes the darker angel presents to the nostrils an apple of the Tree of Life.
other times........
not so much.
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clumseYdaiseY 219.95.186.251 |
25-Jan-04/11:38 PM |
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romantic in nature.i like it so much!
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| Re: What A Little spark Can Do by Blindpoetry |
clumseYdaiseY 219.95.186.251 |
26-Jan-04/12:27 AM |
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| Re: Make Love to Me by drumrgirl30 |
clumseYdaiseY 219.95.186.251 |
26-Jan-04/12:39 AM |
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Tits 195.157.153.253 |
26-Jan-04/1:20 AM |
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How well do you know Chris Buckley?
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Christof 217.44.71.71 |
26-Jan-04/5:50 AM |
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No no no. Wasn't this copied off the back of a Shania Twain album?
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| Re: Captain Cannibal by Lenore |
zodiac 67.240.192.62 |
26-Jan-04/6:04 AM |
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"Stagnant pools of seamen"? You know I was otherwise bound to like this. One thing, though: the end of a stanza never-ever is the same as a period. You have to go back and put some in.
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