| Re: diamond of love by crwncka1 |
<{Baba^Yaga}> 24.126.116.54 |
12-Dec-03/1:43 AM |
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You should put that on the special skills section of your resume. You'd freak'em out in management.
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?-Dave_Mysterious-? 163.1.234.85 |
11-Dec-03/5:13 PM |
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I've never heard of a selection of paths as a metaphore for choosing Jesus before. How do you manage to be so creative?
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| Re: Let Go by PunkyPanda |
?-Dave_Mysterious-? 163.1.234.85 |
11-Dec-03/5:15 PM |
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You need a fuckin' heater, man.
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?-Dave_Mysterious-? 163.1.234.85 |
11-Dec-03/5:16 PM |
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This is just a copy of Xeno's paradox.
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Shuushin 147.154.235.52 |
12-Dec-03/7:48 AM |
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It has a fairy tale feel to it with this kindof two choices; black/white, good/evil simplicity (would that it were so!).
This standing at the edge of an abyss (equipped with two bridges, apparently) is a classic existentialist image - interesting considering the context ("I stare into the abyss and it stares back"; a feeling of dread at the realization of nothingness)
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| Re: Without you by Luv2write |
Shuushin 147.154.235.52 |
12-Dec-03/8:20 AM |
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I dunno. could do without a few of the cliches and stock images.
I actually thought maybe it was satire toward the middle there, started hoping for a twist ending.
Must be getting jaded in my old age.
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| Re: The man of steel by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
Shuushin 147.154.235.52 |
12-Dec-03/9:01 AM |
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A nice quick and jaunty one-off. Probably built itself - maybe could use some reformatting/restructuring now that you know what it's about.
entertaining in any case.
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| Re: EGG by ?-Dave_Mysterious-? |
==Doylum 80.225.182.113 |
12-Dec-03/9:09 AM |
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surely one egg would have been un oeuf!!!!111
quack quack quack quack
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| Re: What I really needed by Shardik |
==Doylum 80.225.182.113 |
12-Dec-03/9:13 AM |
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have you got writters bloke?
you haven't written a poem for at least 2 minutes!!!
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| Re: What I really needed by Shardik |
==Doylum 80.225.174.55 |
12-Dec-03/9:15 AM |
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
==Doylum 80.225.174.108 |
12-Dec-03/9:24 AM |
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| Re: Let Go by PunkyPanda |
PunkyPanda 65.125.114.157 |
12-Dec-03/10:08 AM |
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Lol...I wrote this one about a guy I was dating who lived in Chicago (I live in AZ duh) so I just woke up one night and wrote it, these things come to me in my sleep...strangest thing :)
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| Re: Hurt by PunkyPanda |
PunkyPanda 65.125.114.157 |
12-Dec-03/10:11 AM |
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No No No... They hate me because I hurt them, and since the thought of my exsistance makes them sick to their stomaches...I'm willing to die to leave them happy knowing I'm no longer living. Basically, I care about them so much and I want them to be happy, I'll die for them.
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| Re: The man of steel by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
Caducus 195.92.168.166 |
12-Dec-03/1:51 PM |
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| Re: Lessons on being a man by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
Caducus 195.92.168.166 |
12-Dec-03/1:53 PM |
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Caducus 195.92.168.166 |
12-Dec-03/1:54 PM |
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Line 9 - loved it
Infact i'll even stay behind and clap the damn orchestra --8
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Caducus 195.92.168.166 |
12-Dec-03/1:55 PM |
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don't care what this is about it hit something shallow and landed on deep.
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| Re: Lessons on being a man by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
horus8 24.126.116.54 |
12-Dec-03/1:55 PM |
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"hospital" typo early on.
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| Re: What I really needed by Shardik |
Caducus 195.92.168.166 |
12-Dec-03/1:58 PM |
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I think i know what your're wrting of here.
Dad?
You don't have to conceal to reveal - however i love this for its fragility and pride.
I'm moved 10
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
horus8 24.126.116.54 |
12-Dec-03/2:00 PM |
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