regarding some deleted poem...	half.italian 76.172.249.205	5-May-07/11:36 AM
Awful moaning in the backyard. Coital ecstacy.
Re: Final Moon by Caducus	half.italian 76.172.249.205	5-May-07/11:46 AM
I like some of the images, but they don't really join into a whole. Is this love? "surgeons on my father" says gentle to me, which is what I think you are going for. At the same time, the image of surgeons on my father reminds me of blood and sickness, rather than love. What are "English" hands? "slave", "voil", "blinded", "average" All those words in this poem just confuse me.
regarding some deleted poem...	half.italian 76.172.249.205	5-May-07/11:50 AM
Lousy title.
regarding some deleted poem...	cheese.doodles 76.64.15.154	6-May-07/10:17 AM
Very clever. I quite like it.
Re: Snow by MacFrantic	pete 62.56.114.137	7-May-07/3:48 PM
poweful opening swooned into greeting-card land
regarding some deleted poem...	pete 62.56.114.137	7-May-07/3:50 PM
lol
Re: Altitude by half.italian	pete 62.56.114.137	7-May-07/3:56 PM
an unwinding coil, eh? ... wassat? helium whispers is nice
regarding some deleted poem...	pete 62.56.114.137	7-May-07/3:59 PM
empathically inclined to vote eight, but just can't
regarding some deleted poem...	pete 62.56.114.137	7-May-07/4:00 PM
the perfect haiku
Re: Final Moon by Caducus	pete 62.56.114.137	7-May-07/4:02 PM
kinda nice
regarding some deleted poem...	pete 62.56.114.137	7-May-07/4:03 PM
yuk but adequate
Re: requiem for the dead generation by Prince of Void	pete 62.56.114.137	7-May-07/4:11 PM
... cheer up; can't be that bad!
regarding some deleted poem...	pete 62.56.114.137	7-May-07/4:22 PM
absolutely
Re: The Emperor's new clothes by thetrev	pete 62.56.114.137	7-May-07/4:27 PM
cutting edge improvisational phrasing with retro hip-hop under and overtones
regarding some deleted poem...	pete 62.56.114.137	7-May-07/4:30 PM
aaaahhh .... absolutely nice; hardly a poem of any great worth, though
Re: Lustlets of longing by bharat shekhar	pete 62.56.114.137	7-May-07/4:32 PM
the poetry seemed to dry up after you came;... never mind, ... happens to all of us :-)
Re: Worn Ruse by drnick	pete 62.56.114.137	7-May-07/4:35 PM
fabulous concept not done full justice by this poem
regarding some deleted poem...	pete 62.56.114.137	7-May-07/4:40 PM
got lost in the hims and yous in the final couplet
Re: again it happnes by skaskowski	pete 62.56.114.137	7-May-07/4:45 PM
... yeah but whats it all mean? and is it Art? :-/... yes I'm sure it is :-)
Re: Castle of Pandas IV by FreeFormFixation	pete 62.56.114.137	7-May-07/4:48 PM
string band school of creative writing seems like