Bachus
on some deleted poem
14 Nov 2003, 2:50 PM
yours too.
thanks all. By "they" I meant elders or those before real knowledge changed their ideas. I changed the title about five times - still not sure I'll go with this one. Any suggestions?
good. number one. where you belong.
so true
Potential.
I can't decide whether this is brilliant or bullshit. I'll give you the benefit of the doubt.
good dont know what you really meant by it but good!
I am sure you meant well.
As free verse it sucks. As a Pimple it is pretty good.
im not good at putting them into styles
how many babies!?
A very moving and positive piece.
DeadtotheWorld
on Okay, so it doesn't actually work, it's still shit-funny... by Yardbird
14 Nov 2003, 9:19 PM
funny
Nice
Why do you run around giving people tons of tens and tons of zeros without reading their poetry (unless you read twenty to thirty poems a minute, and with some sort of attitude problem. Are you weird? Or just mentally unsound? you do realize you gave me 900 zero's today on purpose? Why and how do you consider yourself an artist to be taken seriously when you behave like that? Your barely an amateur and not even that because you don't even meet the definition to that word. You are a bitter old man with little motive and lots of pointless resentment.
look at dreamersupreme- none of my poems on him have a score higher than 5 (cept maybe one, or two)
shit happens? nutcrunch time?
(and what about that lump of coal? maybe im being paranoid)
well, heres a 7.
I rather enjoyed this poem.
Dog killing only counts if you eat it.
:o)