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Shuushin on some deleted poem 28 Oct 2003, 4:26 AM

I was Mooooved. -10-

Y2KSlamPoet on FatHairyWomen - Hey! Look! I'M INCREDIBLY DIM-WITTED! by y2kSlamPoetX 28 Oct 2003, 6:25 AM

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richa on some deleted poem 28 Oct 2003, 6:59 AM

A bit confused whether this is about shearing and neutering, or just killing the cow and selling it on. Anyway I think I get the point. Comparing it to graduation(human) is quite cute and thought provoking. Perhaps the end is a bit drawn out though. Once you work out it is about cattle - that should be the end.

richa on leaving by windlessbreez 28 Oct 2003, 7:10 AM

this is too generic, perhaps if you wrote something more creative a title would jump out at you (and the reader). The style is pretty good/ readable in both your poems I think.

richa on The Right to Life by Retaliate 28 Oct 2003, 7:15 AM

Good, like the flow of the haikus. They are haiku in spirit as well as syllable. The argument in the last three verses loses discipline though. None of those would stand up as a single haiku.

richa on some deleted poem 28 Oct 2003, 7:18 AM

penumbrally? I am in favour of rhyming unusual words but this is ridiculous. like the idea of her look burning away the shadow

richa on comment-ary by nentwined 28 Oct 2003, 7:23 AM

could be about poemranker

some deleted user on some deleted poem 28 Oct 2003, 7:27 AM

I think you are great.

xxx on some deleted poem 28 Oct 2003, 7:29 AM

HuH? Sports? Way too esoteric for me.

xxx on some deleted poem 28 Oct 2003, 7:46 AM

Makes me shiver. Scenes like this are what made me move to a warmer clime. 22.11

xxx on some deleted poem 28 Oct 2003, 7:53 AM

This did not go anywhere and ... well, it did not go anywhere.

fair12 on some deleted poem 28 Oct 2003, 8:00 AM

my thanks to each of you. I did run the caps at each line (don't usually - now I know why...) Y2KSlamPoet - my apologies for stiring that memory - and condolences. I thank you for the vote none the less... Best.

fair12 on Teaching Beetles To Swim by Bobjim 28 Oct 2003, 8:04 AM

I think this title is great...

newdawnfades on Through Poetry by newdawnfades 28 Oct 2003, 8:20 AM

Thanks for the comments!

<~> on Teaching Beetles To Swim by Bobjim 28 Oct 2003, 8:29 AM

i enjoyed this more than anything i have read here in months. thank you. only one line interfered with my pleasure: "That it's them sing (not me)," i thing should be reanimated to: It's them that sing, (not me),

Yatasuma on Waiting On A Friend by Yatasuma 28 Oct 2003, 8:58 AM

I have DSL, but my provider really sucks, i get booted way too often.

Shuushin on some deleted poem 28 Oct 2003, 9:03 AM

Okay - this is close to something very good, but the articles, conjunctions and prepositions nearly outnumber everything else. Really interrupts the flow of lovely imagery and a deeper concept, IMHO.

INTRANSIT on some deleted poem 28 Oct 2003, 9:50 AM

Again, I like it as is. It took me two worthwhile reads. the end.

emeraldeyes on some deleted poem 28 Oct 2003, 11:54 AM

what the hell...i enjoyed it

emeraldeyes on One Summer by [mojo] 28 Oct 2003, 11:56 AM

this struck a chord with me...a good one.