Re: Monsters by MacFrantic	Prince of Void 80.71.125.138	3-Apr-07/9:31 AM
monsters ..it's a good choice of title
Re: Monsters by MacFrantic	Prince of Void 80.71.125.138	3-Apr-07/9:34 AM
monstrocity...
Re: Shuushin the multi-personality total cunt by mr cunt	richa 81.179.78.209	4-Apr-07/3:09 AM
Everyone is everyone. You could post under everyone but you are not in our club.:(
regarding some deleted poem...	richa 81.179.78.209	4-Apr-07/10:33 AM
Tasting flavourless is an oxymoron.
Re: you've returned i'm glad by richa	Dovina 208.127.114.157	4-Apr-07/10:34 AM
Speak to that squirrel on your windowsill if you will, or go tip-tapping with me on that birch. I am most surprised, however, to see a gentleman in a tatty coat.
Re: Easter should be closer to Christmas by MacFrantic	Dovina 208.127.114.157	4-Apr-07/10:38 AM
How does a drum play? And what does it matter what day Easter and Christmas are on? Some provocative unintelligible lines here.
Re: A KISS TO BUILD A DREAM ON . . . by stevopoet	Dovina 208.127.114.195	6-Apr-07/7:15 AM
The title is a bit cliche, and the endnote shows us nothing new. Allusions are good, but not carried through, not built upon. The old English is out-of-place when not used throughout.
Re: You can't send love to a voicemail. by drnick	Ranger 86.131.48.48	7-Apr-07/6:18 AM
This is good. Your next challenge is to write a sequel including the words 'bunnies', 'sunshine' and 'April'. I know you can.
regarding some deleted poem...	Ranger 86.131.48.48	7-Apr-07/6:20 AM
Good haiku, especially the first image - paper and words as crumbling bone works extremely well. You should make a habit of devoting haiku to poemeranker users, they've been excellent fun so far ;)
Re: you've returned i'm glad by richa	Ranger 86.131.48.48	7-Apr-07/6:22 AM
"because I am free they have won and so I"...? Am I being a dunce here? Other than that, ace.
Re: Tribeca by Dovina	Ranger 86.131.48.48	7-Apr-07/6:26 AM
'a consequence of bipeds...' is the best part of this poeme. Do you want the grammar nazi? He's here anyway: line 14 wants an apostrophe in "let's". I'm feeling pedantic today. I won't apologise, and besides, I have to return to my revision :(
Re: View From The Gutter by Skamper	Ranger 86.131.48.48	7-Apr-07/6:28 AM
The cracks and crisscrossing and other initial images made me think you were actually going to describe the tarmac of the street as a metaphor for all this. As it is, it's alright but has been done a lot before.
Re: OneLongDay by Iain	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 212.139.246.27	8-Apr-07/6:03 AM
I suppose you think you're pretty big and clever for spelling your name the scotch way... well I've got news for you: nobody cares. This is a POETRY site for RANKING POEMS. Whether or not you put extra 'i's in your name is neither here nor there.
Re: Tribeca by Dovina	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 212.139.246.27	8-Apr-07/6:08 AM
Poetry isn't just an excuse for you to tell the world about your disgusting and warped sex life. There's a name for that kind of thing, and it isn't Art. It's Smut.
Re: Memories by RION12	cheese.doodles 70.52.169.248	8-Apr-07/8:54 AM
Oh, poor you, whiny baby. Look, this poem is rambly and boring with no metaphor, poor rythm and I think you break the sympathetic contract in your first two lines. Remember to show, don't tell.
Re: All Meta-Verse Shall be Deleted, it is Poison by middenHeap	cheese.doodles 70.52.169.248	8-Apr-07/8:56 AM
Hmm, I really like your title.
Re: Sometimes by pinay_miss_azn	cheese.doodles 70.52.169.248	8-Apr-07/8:58 AM
Boo hoo. This is a pimple poem. If you read your poetry to others, no wonder you have no friends.
Re: Good-Bye by RION12	cheese.doodles 70.52.169.248	8-Apr-07/9:00 AM
I get the feeling I've read this someplace before; I realize it's because it's the most un-original poem of all time.
Re: We… by Prince of Void	Prince of Void 80.71.122.153	8-Apr-07/11:01 AM
I found myself alone in skies Where the insanity blinds eyes When I am a king of misjudgments There is nowhere to hide my jealousy I’m drowning in doubts of “whys” As I’m lost within frustrations I’m dying from this agony To stage of the powerful play The play’s a tragedy of dreams
Re: OneLongDay by Iain	Ranger 86.131.44.109	9-Apr-07/2:23 AM
The rhyme of 'pain' with 'Sylvain' forces me to assume that you mean the Arctic trip guaranteed very little French-made bread. This is a terrible situation to be in at any time of the month and I send my most heartfelt sympathies to all such sufferers.