Re: Hairball by jessicazee	richa 81.179.219.225	28-Mar-07/2:35 AM
I have changed my mind. Subverting the haiku is the only art.
Re: Her by Sasha	richa 81.179.219.225	28-Mar-07/1:52 PM
Pass. If you're to write about a her or a he in which nothing happens you need to come up with something pretty spectacular to keep people interested. Purple prose doesn't cut it.
regarding some deleted poem...	Crakyamuni 207.200.116.6	29-Mar-07/2:48 PM
Seems you've taken aninterest since my departure. Look you son a of a bitch, I don't know who you think you are but I think your scum. Most likely an overdated pain in arts asshole, a hemmeroid.
Re: A twisted Trail in Eden’s Garden by Dovina	drnick 24.247.112.155	29-Mar-07/3:17 PM
Very dark! I like it!
Re: Llamas by Skamper	drnick 24.247.112.155	29-Mar-07/3:21 PM
I'm not sure what is going on here, but I like that it's not obvious. I got the feeling of a mind furious with anxious thought, which seemed to work out well. Nice rhythem, as well.
Re: Cane by richa	drnick 24.247.112.155	29-Mar-07/3:23 PM
Hahahaha, heaven-that's funny. But seriously, I like what you've done here although I can't say I get anything from reading this. However that is probably because I am stupid. Yay.
Re: walls by Mutant_X	Crakyamuni 207.200.116.6	29-Mar-07/10:19 PM
I won't waste another moment on your dribble
Re: You can't send love to a voicemail. by drnick	Skamper 202.6.129.18	30-Mar-07/4:13 PM
Loving the title, so direct and harsh! Last line throws me a little though, not sure why, but if I replace 'just wait' with 'hang on' I get it to flow better. Plus it ties in with being on the phone if you know what I mean?
Re: Her by Sasha	Skamper 202.6.129.18	30-Mar-07/4:23 PM
Fast life, fading fast. The third stanza stands out for me, seems I can almost grasp this and then it flows away. Sometimes that's the best bit about reading anothers poems, how the meaning is just out of reach, yet there is an understanding. Nice write.
Re: Jai guru deva om by Crakyamuni	Dovina 208.127.114.22	30-Mar-07/4:37 PM
Are you a Beatles fan? "Across the Universe." How that relates to the ancient manuscript, Nag Hammadi, or why it is mere noise, I don't get. The Word or Logos is, I suppose, begotten. Perhaps whatever you mean is too involved for haiku.
Re: You can't send love to a voicemail. by drnick	Dovina 208.127.114.22	30-Mar-07/4:38 PM
Hi, it's me again, sending you love in a voicemail.
Re: Empty by Skamper	Dovina 208.127.114.22	30-Mar-07/4:42 PM
I think, like others do, that you should use better grammar - mot necessarily perfect grammar, but something closer to conformity. That way, someone besides you might get what you're saying.
regarding some deleted poem...	Crakyamuni 207.200.116.6	31-Mar-07/6:38 AM
They made a movie about this right? If Ice T listened to Cher all day long and spent most of his time in dank Parisian bathroom stalls in Lieu of his Royalty checks, he wouldn't be Ice T...he'd be M. This poem is bad because you don't care about it, it shows. Could be your impetus though, mysterious. High five.
Re: it's the different kind of a poem by Prince of Void	Prince of Void 80.71.122.173	31-Mar-07/11:31 AM
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Re: The Queen Mum - A Tribute by Edna Sweetlove	mr cunt 85.210.242.232	2-Apr-07/6:15 AM
Very witty and charming.
Re: The Tale Of Marietta And The Hornbag Priest (v.1) by Edna Sweetlove	mr cunt 85.210.242.232	2-Apr-07/6:15 AM
Fabbo-wabbo!
regarding some deleted poem...	some deleted user 63.167.136.250	2-Apr-07/8:26 AM
Asspounding
Re: it's the different kind of a poem by Prince of Void	Prince of Void 80.71.122.201	2-Apr-07/10:17 AM
portray happiness words allegory worlds a new dawn our minds oceans inside emptiness and nothingness all memories behind the breeze a brave new world dot.cybernetic wasteland
regarding some deleted poem...	Prince of Void 80.71.125.138	3-Apr-07/9:16 AM
Tasting flavorless.. ,being hopelessly in love. my dying bride numbness in the pathless heart
regarding some deleted poem...	Prince of Void 80.71.125.138	3-Apr-07/9:24 AM
it was good ...