Bachus
on some deleted poem
10 Oct 2003, 8:06 PM
I would love you a lot more if you'd get off my foot.
. TGT AAA ACG ACG GCC AGT. M13-47. CGC
CAG GGT TTT CCC AGT CAC GAC. M13-REV4. TCA CAC AGG AAA CAG CTA TGA C. --- Not being versed in genetics, I got this off the net.
I think your poem is very funny. Is your code hopelessly scrambled or do you have a pattern in it?
Regardless, have a 10.
Quite possibly the best haiku since Steven King's.
Your hair is fine
Like January embers
My heart burns there too
sliver
on Diseases dug out with acceptance and the futility of analyzation unless it's at a poetic discourse by A. Nomaly
10 Oct 2003, 8:37 PM
DAMN'I like your Style. Well done.
I suspected something different in the beginning. This caught me of guard. Very good. Very chilling!
Are those amino acids? Or some kind of DNA chain?
you are mentally challenged
uh
I'll give you a big one oh ranking for this high-quality poem
One of the best I've seen on here!
tadpole
on Gilded Stumps of Olde (AN STORY THAT IS NOT AN POEME) by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
10 Oct 2003, 9:28 PM
POEME, NO!!!!!
POEM, YES!!!!!
tooooooooooooooo looooooooooong!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Depressing, but well written
Touchinng the bottom of a lake with bare feet is the grossest thought imaginable.
that's definitely 10 material, definitely
that's definitely 10 material, definitely
Puts the physics back in metaphysical -
I really like the sounds made by
"you will never deserve" ... / "of farulous verve"
"I'm just a cracka flowin',
not really knowin',"
YOU SHALL HAVE YOUR BIG ONE ZERO!
I think he had a code in his dose.
He was telling you to keep it in your genes.