Garrett S Sexton
on Falling by Lifeboatman
15 Sep 2003, 2:50 PM
Feeling a little pixie.
walking through hallways of protuding corners/
jettison the right angles
my NEH-EH-AME is z, and this ain't me.
good poem, always seem to like yours
I would just like to let it be known that I have no opinions about this poem whatsoever. -5-
callipers is not in my dictionary, so I must agree with Dark Angel. Cute though. "Hum dum dee dum, dum dum dee dum, I'm so rumbly in my tumbly."
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
15 Sep 2003, 1:39 PM
I have re-evaluated. Actually a very moving piece full of eggs and things.
a quaint viewpoint, but could be more powerfully presented. maybe if you gave examples of how you did nothing? also (for my taste) could use a bit more flow... or punctuation... or something. reads choppily.
Pixie poems. I love em {no-one writes about pixies anymore} well done 10
I smell pixies. GOOD 5
Pixies are short. Hey they like to be naughty too. 2
Garrett S Sexton
on Babelfish Poetry (I): A pérola (Português) by Geschäftsreise
15 Sep 2003, 2:35 PM
I have been to Portugal many a time, Burgau is my favourite place to stay. {hope of a unique language}8
BEST DAMN PIXIE POEM I EVER READ {ARE YOU A PIXIE?} 10
BEST DAMN PIXIE POEM I EVER READ {ARE YOU A PIXIE?} 10
I'm sure your neighbours are perfectly nice people.
Garrett S Sexton
on Love has been awoke. (edited, needs new title) by TheVoiceless
15 Sep 2003, 2:46 PM
Young stupid girl love poem. I hate em, all the same, shame. Give me some originality or some FUCKING pixies.{still you and other lonely girls like em so hey 3}
hmm.
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Your comments are so constructive and thorough, you DO deserve comments in return.
Have you ever stopped to think what an amzing feat of technology it is to be able to make a plastic keyring? Could you make a plastic keyring? Two hundred years ago you'd probably be worshipping it as some sort of god.
But if I scratch off too many I won't win the free medium drink!