TheVoiceless
on Slimshady Meets Cali Hillbilly (I Don An Afro) by SupremeDreamer
13 Sep 2003, 1:20 AM
It was a fun read man. Looks like you had to have had a blast writing it. One of those that you sat there forever to write? Little by little, reading over, changing. Looking at the screen cockeyed wondering if it makes any sense.
Being messed up helps you write at times doesn't it?
Dear brother, in order to know poo one must seek the highest splash. Which would be Welsh or Australian and radioactive with talking corn. Not, I fear on poemranker. Now that Settles gone the shits turning mulch better. I just wish he would have atleast hung some christian republicans along with him for the benifit of toilet brushes everywhere.
personally i like to take fat butcher buble baths.
3char1per
10.
best yet.
3char1per
10.
the mute one was beter
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3char1per
TheVoiceless
on Slimshady Meets Cali Hillbilly (I Don An Afro) by SupremeDreamer
13 Sep 2003, 1:20 AM
It was a fun read man. Looks like you had to have had a blast writing it. One of those that you sat there forever to write? Little by little, reading over, changing. Looking at the screen cockeyed wondering if it makes any sense.
Being messed up helps you write at times doesn't it?
super tiz
3char1per
darktri
3chars1per
I like it. It really made me think. Took me in, put me there. I saw the images, feel the feelings. Keep up the good work.
I'd give more than 10 if I could.
Child. I love a good trailer-park. No I won't ovulate for your mother anymore than I would give the tribe up for bread. I've been told a tale or 2.
I almost shit my pants when I read this. I have a good friend from Chile named Claudio who rebelled against Pinochet's coup. And, though I haven't spoken to him in a few years, it has always freaked me out that the twin towers incident occured on the anniversary of Pinochet's coup. That fucker. Was Salvador Allende not innocent? Was the electorate who voted him to popular power not innocent? No, only John Wayne's white hats can ever be right!!!
10 for importance. Thank you for reminding me.
Great poem man. I found out only a year or two after being out and it kicked my ass.
She was long gone off to college so whats one to do. I don't think I'd stand a chance now. Its been a long time since we've last seen one another. Likely turned into what most college girls do anymore, not saying all sexual. Just not her almost innocent self.
I'm giving you a 10.
YOU ARE HORUS!!!!! HORUS!!!! HORUS!!!!!
HAIL LORD BACHUS!!!!
HAIL KING SHARDIK!!!!
WOOO!
lol. bonkers.
truthfully this is probly the worst poem
i have seen of you
try harder.
truthfully this is probly the worst poem
i have seen of you
try harder.
pardon pardon
try to write a poem not something you would
scrible on a post it.3
3char1per
you are the leader of male homosexual poetry.
good job.
peniscabob.
3char1per
o.
and i give you a 10.
as should a gentalmen.
3char1per
GAy
3char1per
quiet sic
vry good