grendal
on Joshua by Bachus
13 Sep 2003, 6:17 PM
cronomag
10
Oh my Lord, what have I given birth to!! Not close to Dreamer quality! -2-
we are the knights who say kni.
3char1per
4.
dig into deep flesh eah.
iNterEstING
Hi Tom! I like skiing in the alps, and walking my dog at the park. I'm single, professional, and packing heat! I like boats, goats, and floats, but parades put me to sleep.
you are my god because one
of my names is
suprembeaner.
3char1per
the word poo'
wouldnt hurt.
3char1per
10.
you shold called it
kill terd,
and add poo'.
3char1per
9
some loves angel trumpet=;/>
emmkay...
3char1per
8.
Very nice. It says a lot but drags or something at the end. Maybe take out the last two lines? Here's a 9 none the less.
Nice poem it says just what you want it to say after reading a few comments. Quite well put together I saw the picture come together and give the meaning. Here's a 10.
its better then the last poem.
3char1per
we are the knights who say kni.
10.
3char1per
we are knights who say kni.
poo'
2.
3char1per
even my luckeypoo' poem is better.
in toher word dont quit your hill billy porn studio.
3char1per
i hope you kill yoursel over this "0"
please.
very interesting.
3char1per
10.
i think you should put,
pilot instead of captain.
ii cap
8
this is a true piece of shit.
Conterminously--
oy.