Nice. I loved "their mewlings". Interesting coming from you- did some research, did you?

I was really enjoying it until then end. Was all serious then it went into "haha I'm trying to be funny." "be manifest" just doesn't sonud right either.

points for venomous bile, but why does something that you can easily avoid conjure up all sorts of cruel & voilent images?

last word of the second line is misspelled.

very painful content - I hope this isn't your reality

I laughed my ass off at this poem. This is one of the only rhyming poems that I have ever enjoyed in my life.

strong mix of emotions - desire and passivism - well done

Golden Que Tip Award.

This is just lovely. A perfect read.

silent and forgetable.. Save us now and happen. you have a way with words. My grading of your poem is ridiculous and can't matter. why would you care what I say it's worth. you've got it and I dont. 9 anyway.

The title is great - Clint should be reading these

sorry, I didn't get it and the imagery is a little obscure for me

Wasabi. and Jesus forgives you.

Quite enjoyable.

I've never known a quadroon to be as black as night.

Would you rather have grammatical feedback than numerical scores?

Why is the title capitalized? I thought you were on the thumpin' wagon again. You really had me going for the first couple of verses.

The comments were as good as the poem. Quite a storyteller, you are.

enjoyable

valid points, some witty parts - seems a bit bulletproof, though. "My poetic commentary on bad poetry was intentionally not that great"