some deleted user
on A Choice Offense by Retaliate
2 Sep 2003, 12:32 AM
What if you were in a prison and there was a horse that would come and visit you? Would you really wait with tickly expectation for that Sunday's visit?
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Well done. Let's hear more
God only thinks of you after your latest fart.
roses are red
violets are blue
i wish i was a poet
just like you
great poem Sliver
teach me?
This poem makes me happy and tearful all at the same time.
so did she?
for some reason, i love love the fact that the spanish rhymes so well. Nicely done.
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
2 Sep 2003, 12:27 AM
What if there was a poem called 'Never'? And you never wrote it?
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
2 Sep 2003, 12:39 AM
Help! I'm trapped in my body and reading your poem!
(wonderful)
Who says 'tis? The concepts are good, but it's a little too eighteenth-century for me. 8/10.
i give it a 3 just because i hate the word bitch so much.
Nice imagery. It wasn't me that killed the old man, I swear. 9/10.
love it
This poem was so good it made me lose my pants. Where are they? Oh, there they are, around my ankles. Silly me. 10/10.
It rhymes, it rhymes hard, but it's a lyric poem so let's not hold that against it. Pretty ending. 9/10.
PS: In your bio there's a verb missing an e.
i'm sorry you feel this way, it must be a shallow life you live in huh? God help you on your judgement day
(wonderful)